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136 Ficlet (poetry): Snyku Shorts (Snyder)

Sep 19, 2009 17:03

Title Snyku: Shorts
Author Bruttimabuoni
Rating G
Word Count 169
Prompt 136 (Band Candy: the factory)
Characters/Pairing (if any) Snyder(/Joyce, in his dreams)
A/N: Some dialogue is taken from the episode Band Candy, written by Jane Espenson. With apologies to mere_ubu and other distinguished practitioners of Spaiku, whose concept inspired this. The end ( Read more... )

136, ficlet, g, joyce, btvs, snyder, brutti_ma_buoni

Comments 20

deird1 September 19 2009, 20:09:53 UTC

*applauds*

brutti_ma_buoni September 19 2009, 20:15:59 UTC

I think rotten tomatoes would be more apt. But you can't say you weren't warned!

petzipellepingo September 19 2009, 20:18:18 UTC

Babies in danger
Librarian plays champion
I go home quietly

Some guys are heroes
They get the girlfriends. That’s my
Reality. Sigh.

Alas for poor Snyder that's the truth.

brutti_ma_buoni September 19 2009, 20:21:54 UTC

And not even a haiku to commemorate his death by snake.

(I may have to fix that at some point. After I've laid down with a damp cloth on my head for a while and stopped thinking like Snyder).

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brutti_ma_buoni September 19 2009, 20:37:32 UTC

(but for nothing else, right?)

Thanks!

rebcake September 19 2009, 20:34:25 UTC

I am delighted. Utterly. I am especially entertained by the idea that he thinks he's losing out because he's short! Oh, the dissociation! (Spike could show he a thing or two, not that it would help.)

I took Tae Kwan Do
And got a commendation
Have lots to offer

*applause*

I so wish I was home, so I could load my "Kung Fu Fighting Snyder" icon!

brutti_ma_buoni September 19 2009, 20:40:19 UTC

Ah, we short people do tend to blame it for all ills. (William probably did; Spike needn't bother). But Snyder is *not* my Mary Sue, just so we're clear.

I saw your icon on something when I'd started writing this - I thought how perfect it was for Snaiku!

gillo September 19 2009, 22:09:47 UTC

Love my profession.
High school is sheer perfection
Without the students

I hate to say it, but Snyder has a point. Schools are lovely and peaceful without the kids!

Great stuff. You impersonate the worm well!

brutti_ma_buoni September 20 2009, 14:12:37 UTC

I'm horrified by how much of this I could agree with (gum is foul, students are messy, short people get overlooked. I repeat *Snyder is not my Mary Sue*. Ack).