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127 ficlet - They Come To Haunt Me

Jul 20, 2009 18:10

Title: They Come To Haunt Me
Author: deird1
Rating: PG
Word Count: 300
Prompt: 127 (The Entertainer by Billy Joel)
Character: Lorne

( it's all the same in the end )

ficlet, pg, ats, 127, lorne, deird1

Comments 17

fmarvin July 20 2009, 09:05:45 UTC

That's a great ficlet. So sad.

deird1 July 20 2009, 22:35:41 UTC

Thank you.

slaymesoftly July 20 2009, 11:59:18 UTC

Poor Lorne. His memories are painful, aren't they? Nicely done.

deird1 July 20 2009, 22:35:54 UTC

Thanks!

curiouswombat July 20 2009, 12:35:23 UTC

Bitingly well observed and so sad.

deird1 July 20 2009, 22:36:09 UTC

Thank you.

brunettepet July 20 2009, 12:47:12 UTC

That was gripping and heart breakingly bleak. I loved the run on sentence of images bleeding together in the final drabble. It would be a balm of Lorne couldn't remember.

deird1 July 20 2009, 22:36:27 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

moscow_watcher July 20 2009, 14:39:55 UTC

Love the ficlet. Very sad and very true to Lorn's voice. Great details:

once, for a group of ravers, a high E flat that lasts for twenty minutes straight.<>
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refreshing lack of heroic detectives :)

*pets poor Lorne*

deird1 July 20 2009, 22:37:07 UTC

Glad you liked it!