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105 fic - Wronged Woman

Feb 13, 2009 19:40

Title: Wronged Woman
Author: deird1
Rating: PG-15
Word Count: 616
Prompt: 105 (You Oughta Know - Alanis Morrisette)
Character: Darla

( a kind of revenge )

101-110, ficlet, btvs, deird1, pg13, darla

Comments 13

brunettepet February 13 2009, 16:36:09 UTC

This is a breathtaking portrait of the ebb and flow of Darla's pointed fury.

I loved this poignant line: He doesn’t even realise she’s watching him - that’s what stings the most. She can still pick him at a glance from a hundred yards away (a hundred years away), and knew the moment he entered town. She really hasn't moved on at all. Nice job.

deird1 February 15 2009, 03:36:40 UTC

Glad you like it!

Darla really is so interesting...

ozma914 February 13 2009, 23:03:00 UTC

That might be the best single Darla fic I've ever read; way to delve into her psych.

deird1 February 15 2009, 03:37:01 UTC

Thanks!

cmk418 February 14 2009, 20:54:24 UTC

I really enjoyed this. You captured Darla - and the relationship she has with Angel - just perfectly. Well done!

deird1 February 15 2009, 03:37:14 UTC

Thanks!

redrikki February 15 2009, 20:29:05 UTC

He’s never even read Oedipus, has he?

Ooh, excellent point about Angel's taste in women. It's not quite the same of course, but he clearly never got over Darla.

deird1 February 15 2009, 21:26:55 UTC

He really didn't...

Glad you liked this!

angelus2hot February 17 2009, 22:48:25 UTC

Excellent!

Perfect Darla characterization!

deird1 February 17 2009, 22:51:39 UTC

Thanks!