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Prompt 008: Serenity

Apr 07, 2007 06:58

Title Home is Where the Heart is
Author Wereleopard58
Rating PG
Word Count 629
Prompt 008
Pairing (if any) Serenity

N/B It was 5.30am when I wrote this so sorry if it seems weird LOL couldn’t sleep

( Home is Where the Heart is )

001-010, serenity, ficlet, wereleopard58, pg, firefly

Comments 6

boy_named_susie April 7 2007, 14:25:39 UTC

Really great use of language and description in this. I really liked it. You have some really lovely lines in here.

smurfyfredels April 7 2007, 16:09:27 UTC

Just beautiful. The reasons for each of them loving our girl are so spot on even if Wash's made me a tad sniffley.

Great job.

alwaysjbj April 9 2007, 11:19:22 UTC

What a lovely look at Serenity and her crew!

blueanddollsome April 10 2007, 00:31:04 UTC

Nice character study. I like the image of Serenity being a cocoon for River. Interesting that you describe Zoe as a protector.

xlivvielockex April 10 2007, 19:11:52 UTC

I like the idea behind this, that each person sees the ship differently and that you described how each person does see it. It was a nice character study of not only the characters but of the ship herself. Great job.