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002: LA

Mar 01, 2007 03:11

Title: LA
Author: aurey09
Rating: pg
Word Count: 100
Prompt: Before (002)
Character: Buffy
A/N: Timeline is 'Becoming'.

Buffy scribbles down a note to her mother. Writing down her emotions isn’t second nature to her but talking about them hasn’t been either. But, she knows that her mom doesn’t want her around, her dad didn’t and he didn’t even know ( Read more... )

001-010, pg, drabble, buffy, btvs, aurey09

Comments 10

boy_named_susie March 1 2007, 03:25:14 UTC

"a city that will engulf her." Great imagery. I really liked this.

aurey09 March 1 2007, 10:20:12 UTC

Thank you. I took a while picking the exact word that I wanted to use to capture that image with.

blueanddollsome March 1 2007, 03:40:19 UTC

she’s just another girl running away, or trying to become a somebody in a city that will engulf her. Just an excellent line.

Very punchy ending too.

I like the headspace you put Buffy in.

aurey09 March 1 2007, 10:23:00 UTC

Thanks. Glad you liked the ending. I always feel that they're the most important things in drabbles and I like to build up to them.

poisontearss March 1 2007, 04:32:44 UTC

Ooh Becoming was one of my favorite eps. This is a great look at what Buffy did on her way out of town, how alone she felt. You can hear it in her voice. Good job!

aurey09 March 1 2007, 10:28:01 UTC

Thanks. I haven't written much around the earlier seasons of BtVS, so I'm glad you think I captured Buffy's voice.

sl_podcast March 1 2007, 06:54:12 UTC

Nice... great "inbetween" fic (inbetween what we see on the show).

aurey09 March 1 2007, 10:31:03 UTC

It's always fun to fill in the blanks, that canon left us.

xlivvielockex March 1 2007, 08:00:22 UTC

This was a great piece of one of those missing scenes or as sl_podcast put it, an "in between" scene. I really enjoyed this and you got right into Buffy's head.

aurey09 March 1 2007, 10:34:32 UTC

Thanks. I love to get into characters the heads, firstly it gets me out of my own mind and I come up with things I haven't thought before. Glad it made for a great 'in between' scene.