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Prompt 014- Pain "Before the Full Moon"

May 19, 2007 15:23

Title: Before the Full Moon
Author: Rachel
Rating: PG
Words: 212
Prompt: 014 "Pain"
Characters: Veruca, Oz
Author's Note: The other day my friend and I were discussion how Pain is a very werewolfy song.

The moon hung nearly full above Sunnydale.

Two nights until the full moon and she felt it. The wolf writhing beneath her skin, begging to be released, ( Read more... )

minor btvs char, bakatulip, willow, btvs, ficlet, pg, oz, 011-020

Comments 15

imbaskinrobbins May 19 2007, 22:19:41 UTC

Wow. I love the repetition here, and I applaud you for making Veruca sympathetic.

rayruz May 20 2007, 00:33:01 UTC

Thank you. I worked hard to create a more poetic piece.

not_purrrfect May 20 2007, 02:41:14 UTC

me again sorry.... I had to reiterate what hands_of_blue said. Part of me always had some sympathetic feeling Veruca. It so was not her fault.

skull_theatre May 20 2007, 00:58:36 UTC

Very, very fantastic! It's quite lyrical in delivery and that makes it so strong! Well done!

rayruz May 20 2007, 01:01:49 UTC

Thanks! I'm very glad you like it. I'm proud of this piece.

boy_named_susie May 20 2007, 01:16:32 UTC

So bittersweet. I like how you alternate between Oz and Veruca and show their differing responses to the moon and acceptance of their situations. Poor Willow.

rayruz May 20 2007, 01:31:45 UTC

I liked their different attitudes about it... I think I might write another piece about Nina...

not_purrrfect May 20 2007, 02:39:19 UTC

Oh! Now I want to pet them both.

Ok now even I knew that came out wrong LOL but you get my drift.

Wonderful

lauratd May 20 2007, 03:41:28 UTC

Really nice texture to this, very sultry and humid. I like both the contrasts and the echoing of Varuca and Oz's thoughts.

rayruz May 20 2007, 06:29:22 UTC

Thanks!