Comments | still_ciircee: Re-post

still_ciircee

Re-post

Jun 01, 2009 13:34

;___; I have so much writing to do. If you see me online, slap me and tell me to get to work. (I will get to comments when I can, I swear.)

In other news, this was my story from the short-story contest over at Ohmiya. You'll have to page back a few to find all the entries but there was some SERIOUS awesome there. I wrote MINE in two hours and I'm ( Read more... )

au, arashi

Comments 27

happenstanc3 June 1 2009, 18:48:21 UTC

I think this was my favorite of all those beautiful fics, along with the long real-magic-user-AU that came in in second place(?). Still adorable. ♥ ;-;

still_ciircee June 12 2009, 02:33:39 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I'm a sucker for girl!Arashi but this was my first time writing any of them as girl. ♥ You make me feel better about myself.

waxrose June 1 2009, 19:11:19 UTC

Ajfjflkf;djk this is SO CUTE. And just the thought of Aiba let loose in a maid cafe is terrifying. ♥

still_ciircee June 12 2009, 02:35:03 UTC

I kept wishing that HnA would let Aiba loose in someplace like a maid cafe--just like they should have cut him loose in the lingere store. That kid is a genius.

jonna594 June 1 2009, 19:38:58 UTC

God, god, god, god...This made me giggle sooo much! There sould be more girl!Nino - ´cause it's so freaking cute <3
I just loved this, Nino and Sho working in a maidcafé...just perfect. Thank youuu!

still_ciircee June 12 2009, 02:35:47 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it since it was my first time writing any Arashi-member-as-a-girl fic. And I'm happy it made you giggle.

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still_ciircee June 12 2009, 02:36:15 UTC

Lol! It was my first time writing Sho as a girl so I'm glad I did something a bit right!

nicefinalbeam June 1 2009, 20:30:16 UTC

I want to be honest with you because I know you'll appreciate it more than me just squealing. I really enjoyed this one, but it wasn't one of my favorites for just a few reasons. One was that it was, for me, really hard to keep 'Honey' and 'Heart' straight as I was reading because the names were so similar. Another thing was that there was hardly any time spent with Honey. It felt like everything was Heart with just the tiniest glimpses of Honey, and because of that it seemed like the story between Ohno and Nino didn't really get a chance to develop. Which is kind of the point, in one sense, as when we reach the end it's only the beginning, but adding just one more interaction between them would have made the story that much stronger.

But that's just my opinion, you know? And I still loved it. ♥ Because, I dunno, there's just a way that you write fiction for them that screams "I love these men!" like no one else and it always comes through! ♥

still_ciircee June 12 2009, 02:54:49 UTC

This is why I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

Honey and Heart. Damn it, I knew I should have gone with 'Sunshine'. And yes, I really didn't spend much time with girl!Nino. I think I forgot how to write Ohmiya. DDD: I really wish I hadn't rushed this so much because I really didn't do justice to it or the contest. Your opinion means a lot to me because I know that you're honest and not just being nice. And since you don't live in my head, I know you have a better perspective on it than I do.

ILU. ♥ and I love your comment.

(PS. Your icons. Oh, Ohno. You make me think there is a Nino somewhere just out of sight.)