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Dec 02, 2010 10:28

Title: Better Than A Dream
Author: stfu_pwentzz
Pairing: Chris/Zach
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Chris wakes up in a bright yellow tent with Zach snuggling him.  
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters just the plot. The boys belong to themselves.  
Notes: Birthday fic for adoorhasopened based off this picture. ! Go wish her a happy birthday because she's awesome. Title. from " ( Read more... )

type: fic, pairing: pinto, rating: pg-13

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adoorhasopened December 2 2010, 19:21:54 UTC
He rubbed his foot against Zach's shins and suddenly found himself pinned against the tent floor with a smile on his face.
So playful. So sexy. This is where heat starts warming my belly.

Zach's hardness was like a promise against his thigh and Chris ground down against it forcing Zach to freeze and groan right into Chris' ear.
HNNNGGGGG!!! JFC. Everything in this is so vivid. The image in my brain. Zach coming undone just a little bit.

Seeing his exit, Chris crawled towards the zip up door before the full weight of Zach was on his legs stalling his getaway... Chris would have laughed if he didn't end up being yanked across the tent to Zach once again.
This was feral and sexy, but also made me shake with laughter. Which only heightens the intesity of it. It's silly and playful and reminds me so much of my husband and I, when we wrestle in bed.

I love that Chris leaves anyway. Just to play hard to get. It's fun and exciting. And I love that Zach is a big softy and forgives so easily even though he's trying so hard to play angry.

Chris fakes a yawn bringing their joint hands back to his lips so he can bite and get Zach's attention that way.
This line has to be my favorite. The bite is sexy, but also I find it so human. Something small that sometimes we miss in fic. Little moments that don't really define the story, but still make it seem so real.

I love these two and I couldn't have received a better story for that prompt!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! *hugs*

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stfu_pwentzz December 5 2010, 08:17:47 UTC
*tackle hug*

The fact that you loved it so much seriously has made my week. I swear I just go "d'awwww" and have a perma grin whenever I re-read any of your praises or comments.

All of these are some of my favorite things (obviously XD) so whooo that they were appreciated on your side, also.

<333 Love that you enjoyed it so much

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