Great whump!joaniexjonySeptember 4 2010, 14:09:23 UTC
Fabulous whump! Loved the splurge gun and Rodney's angst, Ronons too, and lets not forget the knife throwing at the end...now how the hell do I follow this?
As far as the writing and imagination goes, it's a good "oh boy". But the whump is a bit too strong for me, I'm a wuss like that :P But you did a great job with the chapter!
I'm feeling terrible to be the one who put poor John in this mess... Guess I'm more of a soft whumper *lol* and yes, I like my romance and fluff as well :P :P
(You destroyed my rescue plans with Ronon *lol* but that's the game of this joint writing, one doesn't have control over the story. Makes it interesting :) Now I've got to reset my mind and see where Joanie is taking this :)
Gotcha. Well, it was that delish manip that did it. Sent my whumpy braincell into overload. Plus the precedent was set. JoaniexJony had Teyla whip him, so had to keep up the momentum and the degree of whump, plus continue the storyline. That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it! LOL As for light whump - nah, I luffs it heavy, with as much drippy blood as I can get away with without killing him. Toss in some angst and a decent story, and I'm well happy. XD Anyway, I'm relieved it wasn't a bad 'oh, boy'... :P
Thanks sterenyk_strey for this wonderful chapter. What a team!
I just want to say that all you writers are giving us readers an incredible whump treat with this story. It's great. You're all so in touch with each others ideas that each chapter follows on perfectly. It's impossible to see the seams!! Wonderful. I'm really looking forward to see what else you could possibly have in store for poor Shep. Joaniexjony - your turn girl. Do your Magic.
It's been a fun, whumpy ride so far! Had a blast writing my humble offering here. Such a great concept, to have diverging storylines. In this verse, Ronon doesn't save the day. And so Shep gets whumped some more! Yeah! XD
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I'm feeling terrible to be the one who put poor John in this mess... Guess I'm more of a soft whumper *lol* and yes, I like my romance and fluff as well :P :P
(You destroyed my rescue plans with Ronon *lol* but that's the game of this joint writing, one doesn't have control over the story. Makes it interesting :) Now I've got to reset my mind and see where Joanie is taking this :)
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As for light whump - nah, I luffs it heavy, with as much drippy blood as I can get away with without killing him. Toss in some angst and a decent story, and I'm well happy. XD
Anyway, I'm relieved it wasn't a bad 'oh, boy'... :P
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I just want to say that all you writers are giving us readers an incredible whump treat with this story. It's great. You're all so in touch with each others ideas that each chapter follows on perfectly. It's impossible to see the seams!! Wonderful.
I'm really looking forward to see what else you could possibly have in store for poor Shep. Joaniexjony - your turn girl. Do your Magic.
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