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fic: A Moment (1/1)

Oct 12, 2013 00:51

Title: A Moment
Author: stellarmeadow
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Paring: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG
Summary: Danny goes above and beyond to prove his point. Or is that all it is?
Notes: This one was handed to me on a silver platter, really. :) Set after The Weight of the World and Wallowing. Hope you enjoy!

SPOILERS FOR 4.03 BELOW!

( Steve pulled the Camaro up in front of his house and put it in neutral, pulling up the parking break. )

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Comments 9

opalshore October 12 2013, 08:53:27 UTC

So close. So, so, so close. Getting closer. :)

On a different note; how do you find time to write? I have about 4 stories that I have started and none are finished yet. I keep wanting to finish before I post anything. Maybe I should write in smallish chapters and post those one by one...Perhaps I'm just lacking in discipline. :)

stellarmeadow October 14 2013, 03:47:52 UTC

So very close...and yet so far away ( ... )

opalshore October 27 2013, 16:03:18 UTC

Apologies for my delayed reply.

I get what you say about writing when you're busy, that happens sometimes but then sometimes not. Maybe I'm not busy enough. :) And also making yourself do it, sometimes inspiration will strike out of the blue but most often I also find I need to make it happen. And I think my problem with posting before I am done is that I could not go back and change things if I felt the story would be better off moving in a slightly different direction. Not having posted leaves me with the option to still go back and alter things so that I can align the past and present of the story if I decide to change the final outcome. Hopefully that makes sense. And reading others' works always helps with inspiration. So thank you on that count. :)

landrews October 12 2013, 15:22:42 UTC

Wow- a moment well done :-))) This may be the best 'first-kiss' fic I've read in this fandom. :thinks: Yep. I think so :-)

stellarmeadow October 14 2013, 03:48:18 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much!! :):) High praise - glad you liked it!!

gyri October 12 2013, 22:04:03 UTC

You go, Danny! What a huge leap he made to try and get Steve to SEE.

Steve, get with it, buddy.

stellarmeadow October 14 2013, 03:48:56 UTC

I think these two work against themselves and each other half the time. It's so frustrating. :)

But yeah, it's Steve's turn to get with it and figure a few things out, I think. :)

mcparrot October 13 2013, 11:16:59 UTC

Yep - Danny's rant was telling me very similar things. Nicely played.

stellarmeadow October 14 2013, 03:49:14 UTC

Glad that it read the same way to you. Thank you kindly!! :)