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FIC: Waiting for the Night to Fall (1/1)

Jun 08, 2011 22:17

Title: Waiting for the Night to Fall
Author: stellarmeadow
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: NC17
Summary: Danny knows Steve's going stir crazy in jail. So he fixes what he can.
Notes: Yeah, I don't even know where this came from. Unbetaed, so I've only me to blame for mistakes.

( Hours after lights out Steve lies on his back, holding himself still and quiet against the darkness, his hand clutching his lifeline as if someone might take it away. )

h50, h50fic

Comments 51

raynedanser June 9 2011, 02:25:55 UTC

LOVE it!

Just one thing....

Danny's voice was getting horse by the time he said, "I have to go. Tomorrow night, same time. Hang in there."

It's hoarse. ;-)

stellarmeadow June 9 2011, 02:28:13 UTC

Thank you!

And thank you!! I kept typing that by mistake and fixing it...guess I missed one. Thanks!!

raynedanser June 9 2011, 02:29:05 UTC

hee! I wondered if that's what had happened. .:D

stellarmeadow June 9 2011, 03:57:56 UTC

Yup! Thanks for catching it right away! :)

vamysteryfan June 9 2011, 02:54:02 UTC

Wow. That wrecked ME! So hot and sweet and caring.

stellarmeadow June 9 2011, 03:02:08 UTC

Yay!! :):) Thank you so much! I'm glad it worked!!

gyri June 9 2011, 03:11:03 UTC

Ack! Wreck me, why don't you. ;-)

stellarmeadow June 9 2011, 03:17:35 UTC

Hee! I don't know whether to say thank you or I'm sorry... ;-)

americandirrty June 9 2011, 03:11:27 UTC

Wow this is amazing, love it!!!

stellarmeadow June 9 2011, 03:17:56 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it--and really appreciate you letting me know! :)

iamrosalita June 9 2011, 03:20:22 UTC

Oh god. Beautiful.

stellarmeadow June 9 2011, 03:26:30 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you!! :):)