CW RPS: Time Is (Not) On My Side (Jensen/Jared)

Jun 15, 2008 17:33

Jensen/Jared
Jensen and Jared have really bad timing.
Rated NC-17.
2200 words.
No spoilers.

I wrote this to get back into Jensen/Jared writing mood, just starting and then seeing where it took me. Seems it mostly took me to a more or less gratuitous sex scene. Oh well... Title is from the Rolling Stones, obviously.

Time Is (Not) On My Side (Jensen/Jared) )

cw_rps, fiction

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withdiamonds June 15 2008, 23:46:01 UTC
Silly boys. This is really nice. Good job.

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stellamira June 16 2008, 03:24:59 UTC
Sometimes you just want to gently knock their heads together so they'll get it. ;) Thank you!

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ifyouweremine June 16 2008, 03:41:58 UTC
Oh, how lovely! I really enjoyed this; the interaction between the boys was done so well, and the sex scenes (implied or otherwise) were damn hot. And of course I loved that you gave them a happy ending! ^___^ <333

Thank you for sharing!

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stellamira June 17 2008, 01:38:14 UTC
Thank you! It's cool that you found the sex scenes hot, because I (almost) never do when I'm writing, so I can't really judge them.

And of course I loved that you gave them a happy ending!

I can't help it! They deserve a happy ending. ;)

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johnnyjosh June 16 2008, 03:57:16 UTC
Oh man, that was so hot *grins* and I loved the happy ending ^^.

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stellamira June 17 2008, 01:50:58 UTC
Thank you! The happy ending had to be there, I can't write them any differently! ;)

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mediaville June 16 2008, 04:05:58 UTC
Hee! I loved all of the stumbling-bumping-clumsiness. Not only was it funny, but it made it feel more real. Well done!

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stellamira June 17 2008, 02:03:44 UTC
Thank you! I figured there had to be some clumsiness, because why should things go always smoothly? ;)

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paintmydays June 16 2008, 04:06:15 UTC
Love. So much love. And so hot! Really perfect. =D

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stellamira June 17 2008, 02:04:08 UTC
Thank you! :D

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