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Detente Part Four

Jan 23, 2014 18:18

sheppard_hc, action/adventure/, author: stella_pegasi, whump, hurt/comfort, character: ronon dex, character: john sheppard, artist: stella_pegasi, character: teyla emmagan, character: rodney mckay

Comments 6

titan5 January 25 2014, 05:35:40 UTC

Wonderful!!! I love it! Lots of h/c, good team stuff, John talking to Atlantis, great OCs, soldier John, and everything else I love about SGA fiction. AWESOME job with the prompt. Lots of extras like cool original characters (both good and bad), two different worlds, and pictures to go along with the story. I'm officially spoiled!!!

Thank you so much. I couldn't ask for better. Now I think I want to read it again in case I missed something.

stella_pegasi January 27 2014, 23:55:59 UTC

So happy you enjoyed the story. It wasn't supposed to be this long but the story just took over. I am pleased that it fit your prompt to your liking. Also glad you liked the pics.

I was excited when I received you as my secret exchange, but nervous. You are such a great writer, I was hoping you would enjoy this.

You are very welcome and I am very relieved!!

starbuckssue January 25 2014, 11:17:39 UTC

I really enjoyed this, you really did whump the whole team well and I loved the marines who stood guard when they were all in the infirmary. Great teamwork and great story.

stella_pegasi January 27 2014, 23:59:27 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm really happy you enjoyed the story. So glad you liked the Marine corporals, believe it or not, they have a little bitty fan club of their own. I include them in a lot of the stories I write.

Really appreciate your comment!

rissabby January 27 2014, 06:58:21 UTC

I enjoyed this episode-like adventure story.
And, I like how you've left us with an intriguing mystery at the end.

stella_pegasi January 28 2014, 00:02:39 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I actually am writing another story where the mystery of another group of Ancients appears again. I've been having fun with writing a few stories where I've been laying the groundwork for that storyline.

Thanks again for your comment...much appreciated.

PS.. Love your Rodney the hero icon...really nice!