Primeval fic: Atonement

[stealingpennies]

Title: Atonement
Word count: 100
Rating: Gen
Characters: Becker, Lester
For P100 challenge 291: Telephone
AN: Becker angst. I find Mr Perfect Hair bloody difficult to write.

Lester shut the office door and leaned against it. Becker cradled his bandaged wrist. Smoke clung to his hair and clothes. They had been lucky that the damage was limited to an

Comments

[freddiejoey]

Very powerful.

[stealingpennies]

Thank you! :)

[adafrog]

Very good.

[stealingpennies]

Thanks! :)

[fredbassett]

Fabulous last line in a really evocative drabble.

[stealingpennies]

Thanks - Becker suffers very nicely!

[lukadreaming]

Ouch! That last par packs a punch.

[stealingpennies]

Cheers - Becker does guilt well!

[deinonychus_1]

Meep, poor angsty guilt-ridden Becker.

[stealingpennies]

*g* He's lovely when he suffers...