FIC: 'Secret' is Just a Better Word for 'Lie' (Logan/Veronica) NC-17

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Title: 'Secret' is Just a Better Word for 'Lie'
Author: StarCrossdSparrow
Character / Pairing: Logan/Veronica, mentions of Lilly/Logan and Duncan/Veronica
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Smut
Chapter: 1/1
Word Count: ~10,500
Disclaimer: I don't own anything... I don't even pwn anything. RT is the master of the Mars-iverse; I just live and die in it

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First off, let me apologize for not doing this feed-back earlier. Yesterday was crazy, and even though I managed to read this several times in between my study breaks, I wanted to make sure I had plenty of time to give this the feedback it deserves. :D
Pfft! No apologies necessary, hon! It was your day and you helped someone move! Crazy. I'm just glad you like it!

And your Lilly voice? Oh my god. You need to write her more often! She's so incredible and so much fun!
Ha! It scares me that everyone thinks my Lilly and my Dick voices are so good. What sort of person am I really? A sex kittenish surfer boy? Oh Lord. But, on the other hand, I'm glad for the compliment. Lilly was an awesome girl, and without her, there'd be no Veronica (show or girl) -- so thank you!

I also like that Veronica isn't a simpering princess. She is naive, but she's also the Veronica, I love, and everyone else seems to hate :( , underneath that.
Yeah, I always felt like she had more beneath that pretty, pretty princess exterior. I mean, someone doesn't turn into Veronica Mars without a spine in the first place. In flashbacks, we rarely see her on her own, so I like to imagine she fantasized about Logan. Who wouldn't, right?

Oooooh and when they get to the party, I love how Logan makes his presence known, with the wolf whistle, devour-y looks, and the leaning.
Holy Christmas, I know!! That scene, in my head... positively steamy! Glad it came off so well in the execution.

Wow, I love this bit so much. I love that he's angry, and not just protective, and that he was watching her.
Yeah, that Logan -- he can't feel just one emotion at one time, can he? No, he's got run the whole gamut in 2.5 seconds ;)

But who found out about Logan and Veronica being together?
I figured the gossip would just start when the party-goers realized that Logan and Veronica were both gone. I also figured, in Lilly's eyes, the mere thought of them together was damning enough -- whether she actually knew or not is up in the air, but when Veronica didn't deny it, Lilly knew something had happened.

It reads like the start of a multi-chapter story! Now that Veronica's been outcasted, what's going to happen?
Well, that's not really a critque at all then, is it? *claps* Hee!
If the mood strikes, you never know where I might be able to take this :)

I'm so happy that you liked it, doll! Hope your birthday was terrific *hugs*

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Yeah, I always felt like she had more beneath that pretty, pretty princess exterior. I mean, someone doesn't turn into Veronica Mars without a spine in the first place. In flashbacks, we rarely see her on her own, so I like to imagine she fantasized about Logan.

Precisely, I mean in Lord of the Bling, in the flashback when they talk about going to Logan's for the party, the scene where he talks about his parents going out of the country to see yaks or something, Veronica said something like, "While I'll be taking photos of you, yakking in the privacy of your own living room."

She definitely had some sort of back bone. And yes, she was totally fantasizing about Logan... I mean come on, she was dating Duncan. Of course she was. ;D

Now where's my sequel!!!!?