The Man in the Moon (OT, Han Solo/Leia Organa, R)

[saucysushi]

Title: The Man in the Moon
Author: saucysushi
Rating: R for explicit sexual content. No kiddies allowed.
Word count: 3596 words.
Summary: OT, Leia/Han: fast and dirty, first time scenario where Leia is not a terrified virgin - shell-shocked.
A/N: So I know the Cloud City theory is tired but after watching the movies it just makes the most sense

Comments

[batgirl_forever]

*cackling with laughter* The best line so far:

“You stupid scruffy two-bit dumb as a dewback nerfherder, I should - why I never - you aren't a nice man!”

If you find it strange I'm so amused, just know that now I laugh with no abandon at the H/L parts of Empire. It's too terrifically awkward not to.

Okay, serious now (awww). That was some finely crafted, well thought out, splendidly characterized piece of fiction. I didn't really notice any shoddy grammar you warned about. And this didn't really read like a smut for smut's sake piece--it's psychologically pleasing, giving us a glimpse of Han that we really don't get to interact with very much. The banter is priceless, and it has atmosphere. Smashball (ten points for the smashball reference, btw), mini flashbacks--it's as close to perfect as it could come. Wonderful job.

[batgirl_forever]

Nope, didn't notice any shoddy grammar in your piece--just my own comment. That's what I get for self-editing mid thought. *facepalm*

[saucysushi]

Heh. Leia's insults fail when she's angry. I love the H/L bits in Empire! They're my favorite and they make me giggle. You're so sweet! To be honest I pieced together other things I'd written and tried to make a coherent piece of it. I'm glad it wasn't just PWP, even though that's not a bad thing. The banter came easier than the rest of it did. Yay smashball! I like to think Han had a collection of weird t-shirts from intergalactic sporting events. Mini flashbacks are irresistable too! Batman fan hey? I saw the movie opening night and it blew my mind. I've been on a Batman kick ever since and it blew my mind even more than Batgirl is his love child with Catwoman! And she was on Birds of Prey! I didn't even understand that show when I was younger. Craziness!

[batgirl_forever]

Actually, you're thinking of Helena, the Huntress. And as much as I liked Birds of Prey--and pre-ordered the show when it was announced for DVD--they took a few liberties with the official Bat-canon. Huntress is only Bruce's daughter in BoP; however, their is an alternate reality in the Earth-II continuum where the current Huntress is Helena Wayne.

Coincidentally, Selina now has a daughter named Helena--but by another man. The original Batgirl has always been Barbara Gordon, Jim's adoptive daughter.

Sorry if I sound like a know-it-all that way--I've been a Batfan from the age of about 3. And a stickler for details and precision since I was nine.

Dark Knight=love, love love.

[saucysushi]

That'll teach me to trust Wikipedia. Too bad we didn't see Barbara Gordon in the new movie. Ah well, when you include one sidekick you need to include them all. Then you enter the realm of Batman Forever cheesiness.

[batgirl_forever]

You see, that's what confused me--I've referenced the Wiki for Babs several times, and I've found nothing but reliable intel. I wrote a poem from her perspective, and not having the original issues she appeared in, I needed some sort of base for how old she was when she went to live with Jim, where she came from, that sort of thing. Incidentally, we do see "Barbara Gordon" in TDK--because Barbara was the name of Jim Gordon's first wife.

But Gordon also has an unnamed daughter in TDK. Which is very curious. When Begins came out, there was a reviewer who felt Robin had no place in this interpretation--but an angsty Barbara was possible. I agree with him completely--and they don't have to introduce both Babs and Dick. In the animated show that just recently ended, Batgirl was introduced a full season before Robin. This was rather thrilling for me--until I saw she wore a skirt as part of her outfit. *makes a face* You can't fight in a skirt, no matter how short.......