Director's commentary - Chapter 4

Jul 31, 2010 17:36

I was absolutely late enough with this, wasn't I? XD

Joshua is such a flirt in this chapter, holy crap XDDD If only Neku could take a hint. Then again, Joshua doesn't want to show anything more than a playful exterior, either.

SHIMMMMMMMMMMER.

Neku's kind of high off Shibuya there at the end, in case that wasn't clear. I think the abrupt transisition from "You suck" to " :D " worked fairly well, but I'm still not entirely happy with it.

I actually intended this chapter to be a bit longer, but life pressed down on me and I was like "Oh whatever, I'm posting it already." Next chapter will involve more high!Neku.

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