forget structure
Speed writing. In the Entry box. Because I'm sick of working on my longer fics. I miss drabbling.
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They aren't real people anymore. Not after they have become immortal. They call themselves Gods, perfect, flawless human beings (only Kakuzu sees every one of his flaws. He counts them at night, hides them during the day). They have forgotten what the arms of a lover feel like (Hidan hasn't really, but he'll never tell). They do not understand sweet words, only words that speak of hatred and death. And yet there is happiness there. A sick happiness perhaps, but in their power they have found joy. An angry, bitter sort of joy , but it is there. Hidan can laugh at how easy it is to kill, and Kakuzu can feel the pull of satisfaction when he sees what his body has become.
They are invincible now, they may as well enjoy it.
And also: a dialogue piece! I don't care if it sucks, this was so much fun to write <3
"Okay, so I don't get it."
"Get what?"
"How he killed him!"
"Are you a complete idiot, or something? He used that sword-"
"With the unreasonable name?"
"That's the one. Anyway, yeah, the sword, or something like that. I don't know the details. I happened to be unconscious."
"Yeah, yeah, I know. But still, or something? Itachi probably just lay down and let Sasuke kill him. I mean, come on. I've fought that guy before-"
"Sort of."
"Shut up. Anyway, he's no picnic."
"No picnic?"
"What?"
"Never mind. Go on."
"Yeah, right, so I think Itachi just like, gave up or something. Because Sasuke can't be that good. Once you get caught in that mindfuck thing it's pretty much over, isn't it?"
"I guess so. Whatever, just don't mention that in front of Sasuke."
"Queen Sasuke. How can you still love him?"
"I don't!"
"Sure you do. Fuck, you're blushing! I thought when the bastard left it would finally be my turn."
"Your turn for what?"
"You know. The Sakura loving."
"Um, I'm going to pretend you didn't say that, okay? I do not love Sasuke. i don't even like him!"
"Uh, yeah okay Sakura. Obviously I believe you."
"You're no good at sarcasm."
"You're...flat as hell!"
Smack.
Yes.
♥
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They aren't real people anymore. Not after they have become immortal. They call themselves Gods, perfect, flawless human beings (only Kakuzu sees every one of his flaws. He counts them at night, hides them during the day). They have forgotten what the arms of a lover feel like (Hidan hasn't really, but he'll never tell). They do not understand sweet words, only words that speak of hatred and death. And yet there is happiness there. A sick happiness perhaps, but in their power they have found joy. An angry, bitter sort of joy , but it is there. Hidan can laugh at how easy it is to kill, and Kakuzu can feel the pull of satisfaction when he sees what his body has become.
They are invincible now, they may as well enjoy it.
And also: a dialogue piece! I don't care if it sucks, this was so much fun to write <3
"Okay, so I don't get it."
"Get what?"
"How he killed him!"
"Are you a complete idiot, or something? He used that sword-"
"With the unreasonable name?"
"That's the one. Anyway, yeah, the sword, or something like that. I don't know the details. I happened to be unconscious."
"Yeah, yeah, I know. But still, or something? Itachi probably just lay down and let Sasuke kill him. I mean, come on. I've fought that guy before-"
"Sort of."
"Shut up. Anyway, he's no picnic."
"No picnic?"
"What?"
"Never mind. Go on."
"Yeah, right, so I think Itachi just like, gave up or something. Because Sasuke can't be that good. Once you get caught in that mindfuck thing it's pretty much over, isn't it?"
"I guess so. Whatever, just don't mention that in front of Sasuke."
"Queen Sasuke. How can you still love him?"
"I don't!"
"Sure you do. Fuck, you're blushing! I thought when the bastard left it would finally be my turn."
"Your turn for what?"
"You know. The Sakura loving."
"Um, I'm going to pretend you didn't say that, okay? I do not love Sasuke. i don't even like him!"
"Uh, yeah okay Sakura. Obviously I believe you."
"You're no good at sarcasm."
"You're...flat as hell!"
Smack.
Yes.
♥