Alone

[starsheild]

Title: Alone
Verse: G1 AU
Rating: PG
Warnings: angst, mention of cannon character death
Characters/pairing: Prowl, First Aid, mentions of Jazz, Sideswipe, Sunstreaker, Ratchet, Optimus

Comments

[kai_chan94]

My poor Prowler! I hate when people do this to him. Is it wrong that I'm torn between giving you a thumbs up and a squeal and screaming the wrongness to th air? I never did like Hot Rod. Freaking random filler characters.

Still, in spite of this you did a really good job. You almost made me cry. I guess I love Prowler too much.

Kai

[starsheild]

Not at all. I'm glad the feeling I was going for came through.
Hot Rod never was one of my favorites either, but I deny finality of the movie and most of seasons three and four anyway.

Thank you. And no, I do not think it is possible to love Prowl too much.:)

[prowlsgirl]

Quite interesting, switching it around to where Jazz died instead of Prowl.

[gatekat]

*Purrs* Cruel as it is, I love the 'what about the forgotten officers' stories. They're rare. I adore you even more that you have Prowl as a survivor. I so hope you continue this. Maybe you can manage what I couldn't in This Winter.

[starsheild]

Thank you. Honestly, the animated movie and most of seasons three and four never set well with me. I have more ideas, sort of, to continue this because this part actually sprang from another bunny that bit me.

This Winter inspired a little bit of the turning of the potential plot in this, actually...

And this was a break from Stranger 'verse. I've hit a bit of a plot hang-up there...-_-...

[gatekat]

Considering even the company admitted they made a mistake with it -- they killed off folks just to make new toys -- I'm not surprised it doesn't sit well. I don't think many fans embraced it, not even those who embrace some of the characters.

I'm thrilled I inspired you to write this. *is grinning madly*

Want to bounce ideas off me?

[starsheild]

Yeah. The first time I watched the movie I almost couldn't finish it because I couldn't wrap my head around the fact that they killed Optimus. I think I finished it because I was waiting for him to pull a Spock during the movie.

*is that glad that you are happy* And actually, someone to bounce ideas off of (and feed the plot bunnies...) would be very much appreciated.

[sideslip_tf]

I think this was very appropriate. You really captured Prowl's frustration and I liked the small glimpse of his relationship with Jazz. I liked the small touch of Prowl's dry humor adding in the bit about Sideswipe's day off after Jazz was already laughing over the story.

[starsheild]

Thanks. I can just see Prowl doing that though- ignoring Sideswipe and all his whining except to laugh quietly to himself, since Sideswipe was the one who put himself in that position.

[baroness_lamia]

It's an interesting twist, but I hate it when I read stories where one important character becomes redundant. But so well written. I like how you capture the frustration and loneliness when you mention the office not being used at all.

[starsheild]

An occasional sad reality. Thank you for the compliments!