Fic: In Case of Emergency

Feb 22, 2014 15:43

Title: In Case of Emergency
Author: Starseeker32
Rating: K+ or PG
Words: 1044
Characters: Ten/Donna
Warnings/Spoilers: Donna's thoughts during The Kiss (yes, capitalized and with a great big "The") in "The Unicorn and the Wasp."
Summary: Donna shocks the Doctor and herself.
Disclaimer: I don't own Doctor Who. I just wanted to play with the BBC's characters ( Read more... )

donna noble, doctor who, doctor/donna, fan fiction, tenth doctor

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tkel_paris February 23 2014, 04:17:09 UTC
Whoa! That's a thought: being near death his mental shields would be lessened, and so a companion or anyone pyschic or telepathic might get glimpses of what he sees or senses. Genius!

And I hope you'll write a sequel in which they talk about her visions. (I vote for trying for the Time Tots vision. ;D)

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starseeker32 February 23 2014, 16:00:42 UTC
Thank you so much! As you can tell from this and my previous story, I am fascinated by the Doctor's telepathic ability. Because he can see "all that is...all that was...all that could ever be" all the time, I wondered what he could see when he looked at Donna.

This was meant to be a one-shot, but the idea I had for a possible sequel is quite a tear-jerker and deals with the Doctor's head in Donna's during JE. I don't know if I'll end up writing it because I'd like to leave this a bit lighthearted. We'll see.

In the meantime, here's a picture of a deranged emu that had me laughing as I was writing Donna's inner monologue when she was trying to interpret the Doctor's flailing movements:

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tkel_paris February 25 2014, 04:21:29 UTC
Well, I can't help but wonder how true that line is. Because there are things he definitely CAN'T see, and those influence or directly affect Time.

Oh. Then... go with your gut.

*giggles* Oh, my. :D

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starseeker32 February 26 2014, 00:57:00 UTC
I do love Time Tots, but my muse has been in a dark mood lately, so I wanted to end this one on a happier note. Truth be told, I started to write another part to this (one that takes place after they agree to go "onwards") and continue with a hopeful tone, but it seems forced right now. I'll see if I can tinker with it and make it worthy of posting. No promises though. If you're inspired and would like to give it a shot, you're more than welcome!

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starseeker32 February 26 2014, 02:23:11 UTC
Actually, my version of a sequel to this might look a lot like your "Womanly Wiles and Children" story (which I love, by the way). I like you explanation for why the Doctor wanted Donna to "save her wiles."

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tkel_paris September 8 2014, 03:37:39 UTC
I'm glad you wrote something. :)

(BTW, I know some people who've had very bad experiences on Teaspoon. TM being one of them. Any place that would give such a brilliant mind that much grief is not somewhere I want to join.)

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starseeker32 September 9 2014, 01:10:21 UTC
I don't want to mess around with cross-posting fic to fanfiction.net or Tumblr or Teaspoon. It's too much work. I'll keep everything all in one place for now.

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