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starrylizard

Memory in Movement (General Audience) - lvw prompt #4

Sep 06, 2006 17:05

Here's my atlantis_lvw entry for prompt #4: Practice, only female characters allowed (<500 words)

Author: Starrylizard
Characters: Charin and Teyla
Summary: Charin watches Teyla and remembers
Rating: General audience, no spoilers
Beta: rinkle

( Memory in Movement (General audience, no spoilers) )

myfic, lvw

Comments 6

shoemoney2night September 6 2006, 07:53:44 UTC

Hee, I guessed right! *loves this fic liek whoa* There needs to be more good Teyla-centric fanfic around.

starrylizard September 6 2006, 08:56:53 UTC

You picked it, really? Cool!

I'm starting to write more Teyla. Over the last season, especially since they added Ronon, I think she's really grown on me as a character. :)

Glad you liked it! *bg*

kaaatie September 6 2006, 08:07:06 UTC

Great story, hun! That one was my favourite - I love the imagery that you put in your stories. I could really imagine the little Teyla's through the years! Lovely work! :)

starrylizard September 6 2006, 08:59:07 UTC

Thankyou so much! :)

ljmckay September 6 2006, 14:00:05 UTC

Ooh, very nice! I love seeing Teyla grow up. Great choice of POV, too, and beautiful language.

Well done!

starrylizard September 7 2006, 00:43:12 UTC

Thank you! *smiles*

I quite liked this one myself, though there was definitely stiff competition this week. :)