Comments | starry_laa: FIC: The Blacksmith's Son (Arthur/Gwen, PG, 10/?)

starry_laa

FIC: The Blacksmith's Son (Arthur/Gwen, PG, 10/?)

Jan 07, 2010 11:56

When Arthur decided to leave Camelot, it was an incredibly hard decision for him to make. But though the idea of never seeing Gwen again tore at him and it saddened him to leave Merlin behind, there was nothing left in Camelot for him. Nothing worth staying for.

Even before he bid her goodbye, he’d made up his mind to leave without the intention ( Read more... )

blacksmith's son, merlin, arthur/gwen

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littleweasel1 January 7 2010, 12:58:48 UTC

I LOVE this fic SO much! I've taken my lunch early at work so I can read it now...and it doesn't disappoint! You write so beautifully I can picture it all vividly. Can't WAIT for the next chapter. This will definitely be one I print out when it's complete. Thanks SO much for sharing your talent! xx

starry_laa January 7 2010, 15:42:24 UTC

Oh thank you :D I'm really glad you think it doesn't disappoint! And I'm glad you like it so much that you'll print it, that's a nice honour^ ^ Thanks so much for all your kind words, and hope you had a lovely day at work <3

kyra_and_co January 7 2010, 13:10:41 UTC

What a beautiful story!!!!! ♥
I finally read all the chapters, it's really great, a real page-turner!!

starry_laa January 7 2010, 15:42:57 UTC

Thanks my dear! I'm so glad you think so :D Glad you finally read it too. <3

nasirid January 7 2010, 13:18:51 UTC

Oh, that's a relief! They're both safe and sound. I knew with Arthur there, Gwen would be okay but I have to admit I was a bit scared when the bleeding didn't stop. Luckily we had Merlin there too and he saved the day. At least Gwen's day in a way, because the other knights and Arthur saved the day. (Confusing talking is confusing LOL Sorry ( ... )

starry_laa January 7 2010, 15:51:13 UTC

Lol, it's okay I got what you meant! :D

Really glad you liked the POV of Arthur, because it was really nice to delve it and write what he's been up to. If I could, I would write chapters about being in Lyonesse and adapting, because that would be interesting, for me anyway! And you're right about Lyonesse being what Camelot could be like. If you ever get the chance to read my Broken Spells series, I've created a Camelot of what I imagine it will be like- a good Camelot.
No matter how hard you try, or how far you go, your loved ones will be always with you. Even when there's no hope.
Ah wubby, that was such a beautiful line, right there on its own! And you've nailed it :D

So glad you liked that last scene, and that it reminded you of that ep. I completely forgot about that ep too, but I'm glad it reminded you of it!

And so, so glad you liked this chapter! <3 <3 ( ... )

winwin7 January 7 2010, 13:25:02 UTC

sweet & lovely chapter!

starry_laa January 7 2010, 15:51:31 UTC

Thank you, my dear, so glad you liked it :D

imigination January 7 2010, 13:33:35 UTC

Oh, how you're making us wait! Loved this chapter, as always ... Arthur is so brave and honorable in this fic. I particularly loved the scene where Merlin heals Gwen, and Arthur tenderly placing her in bed. I cannot wait for her to actually wake up!

Wonderful job, as always.

starry_laa January 7 2010, 15:54:08 UTC

:D I have this thing about brave and honourable men!! So glad you liked the healing scene and Arthur placing her on the bed, because they were fun to write. Thanks so much, bb, so glad you think so! :D