Poem time
I thought I would post a couple of my poems to see what people thought because sometimes I get really inspired to write (and I'm not that great of a writer) so I'm trying... Leave a comment if u'd like, coz I would like to read ur opinions and advise :)
Everyday I look into the mirror
With so much pain within me
My tears can't seem to make it much clearer
Neither does my hearts depris
A mirror shows the reflected images of life
But can it show my inside abounding with strife?
*Mirror*
You're eyes are blinded by your stupidity
You're mouth speaking with such words is uncontrollable
You're mind within is tauntingly fixed
All I do is endure
My eyes are saturated with tears
My mind speculates with all you do
My within is abounding with discord
Your words to others are intensely potent
To hide your covetous side you may torment
My negligence will soon pay off...
*Emotions of Torment*
Why can't I express the way I feel?
Will my heart ever confide and heal?
One person to listen, that's all I need
To tell all my emotions that i bleed
You've left some cuts, but nothing like this
I've given up and fell at abyss
This will forever stay in my heart
These feelings will soon release and impart
I will never forget the scar you have left
*Scar You Left*
(p.s.) - If u get the chance... download this song and listen to it "Somewhere In My Memory" because I think it's amazing. John Williams (I believe) composed the music along with the other music from the Home Alone soundtrack, Harry Potter prologue, and the Jurassic Park theme. It's been my favorite Christmas song but now I think it's overall my favorite song.
Everyday I look into the mirror
With so much pain within me
My tears can't seem to make it much clearer
Neither does my hearts depris
A mirror shows the reflected images of life
But can it show my inside abounding with strife?
*Mirror*
You're eyes are blinded by your stupidity
You're mouth speaking with such words is uncontrollable
You're mind within is tauntingly fixed
All I do is endure
My eyes are saturated with tears
My mind speculates with all you do
My within is abounding with discord
Your words to others are intensely potent
To hide your covetous side you may torment
My negligence will soon pay off...
*Emotions of Torment*
Why can't I express the way I feel?
Will my heart ever confide and heal?
One person to listen, that's all I need
To tell all my emotions that i bleed
You've left some cuts, but nothing like this
I've given up and fell at abyss
This will forever stay in my heart
These feelings will soon release and impart
I will never forget the scar you have left
*Scar You Left*
(p.s.) - If u get the chance... download this song and listen to it "Somewhere In My Memory" because I think it's amazing. John Williams (I believe) composed the music along with the other music from the Home Alone soundtrack, Harry Potter prologue, and the Jurassic Park theme. It's been my favorite Christmas song but now I think it's overall my favorite song.