this girl seems to want something dirtier, grittier
Mmmm, *squirms* I'm all FOR something dirty and gritty from John. *lays self out in supplication*
The bricks scrape at his knuckles as he twines his hands around her hips, pushing harder and harder into her. Backing out and pushing in, closing his eyes to better enjoy the friction
Ungh! *hyperventilates and plans to dye hair blonde*
He feels better, feels human again. And he remembers Mary. He always seems to remember her more clearly after he does this, which is why he does this. And he remembers why he’s doing this - hunting her murderer, despite the potential costs - til the bitter end. He remembers love.Excellent ending! I love how you intertwined animalistic desire with a deeper desire for healing and reunification with Mary. You're also damn good at getting inside his head, allowing me to feel his emotions radiating from the page. All in all, it frickin' rocked. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go to the
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*goggles* Yeesh, and you offered yourself as my beta? *snatches ficcage back* ;)
Mmmm, *squirms* I'm all FOR something dirty and gritty from John. *lays self out in supplication*
*lays self out beside you*
Ungh! *hyperventilates and plans to dye hair blonde*
*lol* Talk about taking one for the team!
Excellent ending! I love how you intertwined animalistic desire with a deeper desire for healing and reunification with Mary. You're also damn good at getting inside his head, allowing me to feel his emotions radiating from the page. All in all, it frickin' rocked.
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*hugs weird brain girl*
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plus the hot sexing..
*lesigh*
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plus the hot sexing..
Exactly as I intended. *grins*
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Hee!!!!!
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*snort* What does that spell again?? :-P
this girl seems to want something dirtier, grittier
Mmmm, *squirms* I'm all FOR something dirty and gritty from John. *lays self out in supplication*
The bricks scrape at his knuckles as he twines his hands around her hips, pushing harder and harder into her. Backing out and pushing in, closing his eyes to better enjoy the friction
Ungh! *hyperventilates and plans to dye hair blonde*
He feels better, feels human again. And he remembers Mary. He always seems to remember her more clearly after he does this, which is why he does this. And he remembers why he’s doing this - hunting her murderer, despite the potential costs - til the bitter end.
He remembers love.Excellent ending! I love how you intertwined animalistic desire with a deeper desire for healing and reunification with Mary. You're also damn good at getting inside his head, allowing me to feel his emotions radiating from the page. All in all, it frickin' rocked. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go to the ( ... )
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*goggles* Yeesh, and you offered yourself as my beta? *snatches ficcage back* ;)
Mmmm, *squirms* I'm all FOR something dirty and gritty from John. *lays self out in supplication*
*lays self out beside you*
Ungh! *hyperventilates and plans to dye hair blonde*
*lol* Talk about taking one for the team!
Excellent ending! I love how you intertwined animalistic desire with a deeper desire for healing and reunification with Mary. You're also damn good at getting inside his head, allowing me to feel his emotions radiating from the page. All in all, it frickin' rocked.
*blushes* Mission accomplished, yay!
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Too late, baby. Mwahahahaha!!!
*lays self out beside you*
Mmm, a threesome. Me likey. ;-)
*lol* Talk about taking one for the team!
Yes, I'm all about teamwork.
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*shakes head and reaches for riding crop*
Mmm, a threesome. Me likey. ;-)
I just hope John can handle it. ;)
Yes, I'm all about teamwork.
Tagteaming?
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Just lovely.
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Oh wow, this was hot, and sad... all at the same time.
Thank you! Exactly what I was going for.
Thanks for commenting!
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Thanks for reading!
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