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Hidden Moments 5/5 - Together

Dec 28, 2010 15:37

Title: Hidden Moments 5/5 - Together

Author: Stargirl888

Word Count: approx 550 for part 5

Spoilers: None - AU

Pairing: Brittany/Santana

Rating: T

WARNINGS: Light Angst

Summary: Some moments between a couple are private, profound, and incomprehensible to everyone else

( Brittany and Santana )

brittana, glee, hidden moments verse

Comments 11

ma_lintzin December 28 2010, 19:23:12 UTC

I liked this!
It was such a touching story!

stargirl888 December 28 2010, 19:28:39 UTC

I'm pleased you liked it. Thx for reading & commenting

herbailiwick December 28 2010, 22:41:22 UTC

Very nice. I really liked the whole angle of people seeing certain moments.

I can see them raising a baby together.

stargirl888 December 29 2010, 12:02:42 UTC

Me too - they'd make great moms.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

agentb81 December 28 2010, 22:43:46 UTC

Aw that was so lovely. I loved how Brittany was the one protecting and looking after Santana. Great story :)

stargirl888 December 29 2010, 12:07:10 UTC

Thanks! I alway like to think that Santana is the strong one in public but in private Brittany is the one who keeps it all together

wkgreen December 29 2010, 00:10:50 UTC

Thanks for sharing. :)

stargirl888 December 29 2010, 13:58:55 UTC

Thanks for reading & commenting

tsents April 16 2011, 16:34:52 UTC

'lo there! Late to the fray, but better than never, no?

I really really loved how Brittana are shown here; you've shown very different, but very believable sides to them both - Santana's vulnerability, Brittany's strength - and I almost can't believe you actually wrote this long before 2x15 & 2x16 were out!!

Honestly, I wish with all my heart that you'd continue this. It practically begs for a sequel~!! *puppy dog eyes* I mean, c'mon...how can anybody resist the idea of mildly-dim-witted-but-uber-protective-Dad!Brittany who spoils their kid(s) rotten & strict-Mom!Santana who completely gives in when Dad pouts at her??

Plus, I'd die to know Brittany's feelings about Santana being pregnant, and towards the baby she's carrying.

Yeah...I'm just a huge sap like that, I guess. It's just that there are so many butch!Santana & mum!Brittany stories, that it'd be really interesting to see a role reversal, that's all. =)

stargirl888 April 17 2011, 09:13:21 UTC

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this so much, and I'm pleased you found it beleivable.

I'll consider doing a sequel, but no promises

Thanks for commenting :)