New Fic - Kriegsspiel

[melayneseahawk]

Title: Kriegsspiel
Author: melayneseahawk
Artist: ninja_hamsters
Fanmixer: theemdash
Genre: Action/Adventure, Drama, Canon AU
Rating: NC-17 (language, violence, sex)
Length: 42135 words
Characters: Season 10 SG-1 + Jack, SGC Ensemble and OCs, cameo by SGA team
Pairing: Jack/Daniel, Cam/Carolyn, unrequited Sam/Jack
Warnings: spoilers through Continuum and Atlanis Season 5 finale;

Comments

[leo_1978]

Awesome!
If only TPTB had the same great idea, how much better would have seasons 8,9 and 10 been?!
I like how you worked Atlantis into the plot. Even small but important cameos matter.
I like the idea of Daniel having something left over from his ascensions, they never really explored that in the show. Which I thought was really a mistake on their parts.
You do seem to hint at just about every major power: premonition, healing, energy manipulation(how else would he have defeated Adria).
I love the plot and pacing I read it straight through in about 2 hrs. A lot of authors write epics that lose my interest about half way thru because they are so damn wordy. You conveyed a great story without having to explain it too much if that makes sense to you.
Anyway, bravo on a great story. I hope you keep writing maybe something in SGA? Rinse out the bad taste McKeller left in my mouth.
Cheers,

LEO

[melayneseahawk]

Alas, I don't have the ears of TPTB.

I've written a little SGA, but nothing this epic. You can find all my fic in writers_island; there are full lists by fandom linked in the right sidebar.