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Newbie Fic

Mar 10, 2009 00:16

Title: Three things Jack doesn't know about the quantum mirror, and one he does
Rating: G. Or possibly PG, for one tiny curse word.
Character: Jack
Word count: 520
Notes: I am currently on a beta-hunt, but I wanted to post something before I lost my nerve. Thus, criticism and pointing out of glaring errors are doubly welcome. Also, SG-1 obviously ( Read more... )

jack gen, rating:pg-13, gen, jack

Comments 52

dunv_i March 10 2009, 00:28:44 UTC

Please lj-cut.

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 00:41:10 UTC

Yes, sorry, already done. Done wrong, but done. Still getting the hang of the darn thing.

fairyglass March 10 2009, 01:43:08 UTC

This was really, really good. I'd pick a part I liked best, but I liked them ALL "best".

Nice job! :D

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 10:37:03 UTC

Thank you! Glad you like.

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chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 11:12:04 UTC

Thank you for reading! Your comment makes me very happy because I've just started reading your fic and I love it :)

ayiana March 10 2009, 02:08:21 UTC

Wow. This is lovely. I hope to see more of your work soon.

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 11:14:38 UTC

Thank you, and you probably will - I have discovered the joys of fic-writing as procrastination :P

caladria March 10 2009, 02:32:54 UTC

I... wow. There's so much there, with not a word wasted. Love it.

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 11:15:41 UTC

Glad you like. Heh, conciseness I can do, real actual fic-length fic is the problem for me!