Fic: Ascension of the Queen (1/3)

[melyanna]

Title: Ascension of the Queen

Comments

[lightz474]

Hehee, John of Shepards! I like how you used the same name of the characters from Atlantis in this fic. I really enjoyed this and can't wait to read more. :D

[melyanna]

Thank you! :)

[yokiem]

Hi, I love this AU and how you have incorporated everyone into the story. I really like protective Hammond and Sumner and I can't wait to find out what John's ulterior motives are. Great beginning!

[melyanna]

Thanks! And believe me, there are more characters to come in this. :)

[xfkirsten]

Eeeeee! You've finally got it out! :D Absolute LOVE. It has a very epic feel to it, and I absolutely love stories like that! You description at the beginning screams "OMG! I want to make a map of the land!" :P Very realistic, and I love that you really laid out the area.

Ending it on a cliffhanger? Aaaaaaaaagh! :P

Oh, and John on horseback? SHEER HOTNESS. I'm a sucker for men on hoseback.

[melyanna]

Heheheh, well, if you want to do a map, chat with me sometime. There's more detail you'll need. ;) I'd do a map myself, but I don't have a scanner.

And, well, there's more of the horses in this fic. Just you wait. ;)

[ankareeda]

*squee* Finally! The story is utterly wonderful! :) Can't wait to read more.

Lovely layout. :D

[melyanna]

Thank you! :)

[speckleberry]

OOOOh i love this AU. I'm writing one similar for sparky_sparks

I love the whole 'Queen of Atlantis' thing...and oooh this is good!

Please continue ladies, it's a wonderful idea...oh and i love the icon.

[speckleberry]

oooh...and i just wanted to add...quite sneaky of you to use Vala's body in the icon and header...that's cool.

[melyanna]

Thank you! And blast, someone figured out how I did the manip. ;)

[speckleberry]

It's ok, i tend to notice things like that...it's weird. but your secret is safe with me...apart from the completely public and un-screened mention of it...too late. whoops!

hehehe, seriously, keep writing it!