Fic: Measure Every Grief (1/5)

[melyanna]

Title: Measure Every Grief
Authors: angelqueen04, melyanna, and miera_c
Rating: R
Summary: Atlantis struggles to cope with Elizabeth's illness and its probable outcome.
Notes: Last fic of the season, folks. Enjoy the evil. ;) (Part III is the reason for the not-safe-for-work rating.)

Comments

[yaboiksar]

Oh happy joy! Just what I needed on such a bad day.

[scarlet_gryphon]

Gah! Must have more. God, each installment is like crack- gotta have more!

[the_scary_kitty]

I just love Kate and how she's keeping her head screwed on straight here to protect Elizabeth. *pokes Lorne*

Poor Laura! Having to stay away from Elizabeth and Kate and everyone else has got to be killing her inside. *hugs Laura*

Hopefully Teyla and Kate's father can mitigate the mess that Jack's made of things until Elizabeth is well. And she will get well. She will, damnit. *scary look* She just needs the healing power of John's love. *goofy grin*

I'm glad to see that Charles and Sarah are kind of starting to sort things out between themselves. At least Jack won't have to worry about more trouble from that quarter. Ah, Jack. Hoo boy, they'd better be careful how they tell George how he's screwed up everything, or George is likely to keel over again! O_o

Four more parts after this? Aaaaaahhhhh!!!! *flails in fear*

[vickysg1]

First, Kate is absolutely wonderful! Second, yeah for George waking up!! Third, I hope Elizabeth will be better soon.

Anyway, awesome chapter as always! I can't wait to read more!!

[sache8]

RANDOM: 'Decanter' is a cool word. ;-)

Hahaha, I love the_scary_kitty's point about Jack having to be schooled by George when he wakes up. Never considered that before. I love the description of how frail Laura seems (Carson insisting she get away was just one of those moments, you know?) and the scene between Charles and Sarah was very interesting. I thought the tentative choices in dialogue felt very natural.

Dark and suspenseful! Looking forward to more. :-)