Soft Shock - Chapter One

Jan 22, 2011 11:00

Title: Soft Shock - Chapter One (1/3)
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Characters: Francis (France), Alfred (US), Matthew (Canada), Arthur (UK), mentions of others
Pairing: Francis/Alfred (with general easily shippable FACE as you see fit)
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter (NC-17 overall)
Warning: None?
Summary: Alfred has been stressed out lately, and ( Read more... )

series: axis powers hetalia, chapterfic: soft shock, pairing: france/america

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conjure_lass January 22 2011, 23:54:36 UTC
*BLINK*

You wrote this pairing? MY SECRET LOVE PAIRING? The pairing that no one ever writes but everyone seems to LOVE?

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. SO SO MUCH.

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buddha_loves_me January 23 2011, 00:22:41 UTC
lol it does seem that way, doesn't it? That a lot of people are fans but there are very few fic of them. But lol my biggest hesitation is that I can't write Francis for crap...

Thank you for reading! :D

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whyte90 January 24 2011, 01:40:47 UTC
sorry for barging in. but YOU CAN SO WRITE FRANCIS. you're reaffirming my love for france as you write him - so there. i think you write him very well. (I TOTALLY APPROVE!)
and please write more:)

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buddha_loves_me January 24 2011, 03:21:27 UTC
sadglhasd; you have no idea how reassuring that is to hear, I swear. I adore Francis, but I fret endlessly about screwing his characterization up. I'm glad I can do his awesomeness some justice. ♥

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ashori_sama January 23 2011, 02:05:15 UTC
ASDFGHFGH-- I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW, I NEARLY DIED OF EXCITEMENT WHEN I SAW THIS ON THE HETALIA COMM. YOU WROTE FRUS. FRUS.

Spazzing over.

Anyway, lovin' how this is starting off. I can't tell you how much I adore it when people portray Alfred's more vulnerable side. I see so many situations where he's the one doing the comforting, not the one being comforted, and that's cool, but I can't help loving the latter so much. He's just so precious~. x]

Can't wait for future updates!

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buddha_loves_me January 23 2011, 04:08:55 UTC
askdghad; ahahah, I'm glad you approve. It's a super secret (not very secret) pairing-that-I-love. I just never write it cause I'm so unconfident writing Francis. But I couldn't say no to the prompt, and I had a lot of fun writing it. ♥

And I'm glad you like it so far! I definitely agree that there's something refreshing and sweet about Alfred needing comfort. Such a big, confident guy/country like him is bound to need some reassurance and sympathy.

Thanks for reading!

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arrantpedantry January 23 2011, 03:27:36 UTC
I loved this on the kinkmeme and I love it again now!

Alfred scrunched his face up, lips pursed like a fish’s. His face seemed to grow steadily redder. Underneath it all, Alfred did not seem to do well with affection. Attention, he could handle. Praise, too. But affection, legitimate concern, was something the boy was not used to. For a moment, Francis’ heart ached.

Oh hi new headcanon! Nice to see you there :D

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buddha_loves_me January 23 2011, 04:15:35 UTC
That icon is so pretty. *___*

And I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading it again. :)
Hurray for new headcanon!

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thisiskanta January 23 2011, 17:51:38 UTC
sdafkjsad;saldfkads When I saw this in the hetalia comm, I was like "*reads summary* Oh this looks interesting, I wonder who wrote this--- OMG!!!!!!" AND THEN I READ THIS. UK induced emotional baggage or not, reading Fr/US seems to be a guilty pleasure of mine... Hnnnggg I read your other France/US fic and I couldn't get enough of them (almost like a craving) and it's so hard finding a good fic of them xD; I definitely love that you threw in FACE. ;A; It's like you are looking into all of my little guilty pleasures and tossing them in one fic. *very very happy btw ( ... )

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buddha_loves_me January 23 2011, 18:57:43 UTC
It's definitely one of my go-to guilty pleasures. It's just such a fun pairing and there are lots of things you can do with them! I'm really glad that there are other fans out there, since it's true that finding good fic can be difficult (though the FrUS comm has a few good ones :D).

And fuck yeah FACE. I recently realized that I really enjoy the four's interactions with each other. But, again, not nearly as confident writing Francis or Matthew (or even Alfred, for that matter) as I am writing Arthur. But they really are a lot of fun, silly dysfunctional family that they are. ♥

And fff I'm glad you like Francis here. Lack of confidence aside, he really IS a lot of fun to write, and it makes me sad when people just denote him to a random groping pervert. He may be touchy feely, but he does it because he cares~*~ and all that. I think he's a really awesome character.

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :D

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hideincarnate January 23 2011, 21:10:42 UTC
Ooooh I can't wait to read the next two chapters! X3

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buddha_loves_me January 23 2011, 22:39:08 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

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