Highway Cloudbusting -- Part 9 (9/11)

[stardropdream]

Title: Highway Cloudbusting -- Part 9 (9/11)
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Characters: England, USA, mentions of other nations, unnamed American citizens
Pairing: Eventual England/USA
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter (but fic is NC-17 overall)
Warning: Possible cliches and predictability. Also deals with issues of sexuality and coming out, and

Comments

[mayhemagenta]

hgkjshdhsdkhhs I just got back from a 3 hour drive from my grandparents place and I AM GREETED WITH THIS ;DDD I can't tell you how happy I am that you've updated! Firstly, I've gotta tell you that something went wrong-ish with your coding towards the end, 'cause the last few paragraphs are in italics. Just to let you know!

Okay, now, I think my heart was POUNDING as I read this chapter. I was seriously just hanging off every word. At first I was happy that America had his epiphany, but when he started to deny his feelings my heart kind of exploded for England's sake ;___;

I can't believe that so much has happened in 12 days for them in your verse. I'm in awe. *__* I think your America is completely endearing with his vagueness, if not a little annoying (especially to England :D), but when England went totally batshit and punched some sense into him I wanted to hire my own group of cheerleaders to cheer him on.

I am dying at where you left things hanging ;__________; I await your next update! This fic is still as compelling as ever ♥♥♥

[stardropdream]

Oops, thanks for pointing out the mistake! Of course the one time I don't double-check the coding before crossposting is the one time that I mess it up. *ninjas onto the scene and fixes it!*

I feel so awful about leaving it off on such a cliffhanger, but I couldn't find a good place to leave it (it was already 9,300 words...) so I decided that if I had to leave it off abruptly I might as well do it in the meanest most dramatic fashion possible... But I'm already working hard on chapter ten, so hopefully it can get up soon!

I'm so glad you like the story, and the characterizations. I worry over it, especially with this chapter.

Thanks so much for reading!