Coin Laundry

Jul 07, 2010 01:20



Title: Coin Laundry
Pairing: Shibutani Subaru x Yasuda Shota
Rating: NC-17 - R
Genre: AU, Lemon
Wordcount: 6440
Disclaimer: (here)
Synopsis: When he has to use the coin laundry due to his lack of a washing machine, Shibutani Subaru is not amused. But he meets a guy and... well, thing change.
Warnings: Okay, maybe, maybe this is pwp, because the whole ( Read more... )

c: subaru, p: yasuba, f: kanjani8, c: yasu

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gekkouw July 11 2010, 00:24:59 UTC
I should run to bed, instead of reading this? But it's only 2:20AM 8DD I'm not sleepy at all, and Bouken is starting in 10 minutes! xO
and and and and...
I SOO LOVED EVERY WORD OF THIS STORY, really <333333
The amazing feeling of longing, and Yasu being all... seme and pervy at first XD And Subaru is so shy that it's already tooo cute for my brain 8DD But anyway, they ended up with Subaru topping Yasu, so his wish was granted...

I'm wondering where did Yasu's gf go tho..... but I bet Subaru was prettier than the girl, so Yasu choose him.

Oh, okay, I can't say anyting else but THANK YOOOUUUU it was so cute and prefect!!!!! >3<

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arifuretakotoba July 11 2010, 10:08:49 UTC
...and I've long been to bed when you posted that comment |D

but THANK YOU SO MUCH for your nice comment <3

uhm, the correct part in the story was his girlfriend - a really charming guitar-lady named Shoko-chan ,because I think Yasu is technically married to his guitar >: but I guess it wasn't to clear that I meant a guitar and not a girl. even my beta-reader asked what happened to yasu's gf |'D

*goes of to melt because of the heat & you saying it was perfect*

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gekkouw July 11 2010, 12:19:13 UTC
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, the guitar, really?
I bet you won't believe this, but when I first read that line, I thought, "Maybe it's just his guitar, lol, no, jk."
I REALLY DID.
Because.. if it really were a girl, Subaru would have reacted more to the fact, his beloved guy has a girlfriend.

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arifuretakotoba July 11 2010, 12:34:50 UTC
of course it's the guitar!! XD
you should listen to your first thoughts more, turns out they are quite right >D
well, I don't think a girlfriend would have fit into the whole concept of the story, but of course, Subaru would have had lots of sleepless nights because of the gf D:

and hell, YAY for appropriate icon <33
... yasu x his guitar should become my new otp.

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gekkouw July 11 2010, 14:08:46 UTC
Yeah, and I forgot to say how I love that Yasu's always so angry and sad about the fact that everybody thinks, and says he's gay, WHEN HE ACTUALLY IS loloolol. So I though maybe that's why he had a gf - to prevent rumours about him being gay, lol.

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arifuretakotoba July 15 2010, 10:00:11 UTC
why do you have more logical thoughts about my stories than I have? D: D: D:

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