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Dancing in a Minefield

Mar 22, 2010 21:45

Title:Dancing in a Minefield
Pairing: Shibutani Subaru x Yasuda Shota
Rating: NC-17-ish?
Genre: Fluff, Angst maybe,
Wordcount: 2576
Disclaimer: (here)
Synopsis: Under the table and behind the backs of the others, their hands were linked, their fingers intertwined, a painted thumb caressing fading colours of an old scar
Warnings: Kind of a songfic, ( Read more... )

c: subaru, c: yassu, p: yasuba, f: kanjani8

Comments 21

kyoko_godaikun March 22 2010, 21:53:34 UTC

okay, that was just plain wonderful. perfect, just perfect.

arifuretakotoba March 23 2010, 18:35:56 UTC

Thank you very much for reading & commenting the story. It really means a lot to me that you would go as far as calling it "perfect"

epunx99 March 23 2010, 07:41:59 UTC

OHMY

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arifuretakotoba March 23 2010, 18:37:35 UTC

YEAH; I DID IT AGAIN
you told me to do so D:

I'm really glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting.
I'm hapy it made your day. It made my day to read your comment :3

epunx99 March 24 2010, 00:33:26 UTC

new respect for you bb...
you're a great writer and you seem to be a great person too <3

arifuretakotoba March 24 2010, 06:53:27 UTC

I just woke up and have a hell of a day to fight.
Reading this makes is seem bearable, thanks <3
*started to smile 10 minutes ago and that damn smile is still there*

gekkouw March 23 2010, 15:10:33 UTC

Ahmm, heeeeeee. Thank you for this <33333
Fics like this one makes me wanna believe that they really could have such a relationship. We just don't know about it.. Nobody knows about it just the two of them.... Okay, I'm not crazy..... BUT WHY NOT?? DDDD;
But that's..... kinda sad... That you have to keep in secret that you have someone you love so much.....
Well, I'm thinking too much about it

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arifuretakotoba March 23 2010, 18:46:12 UTC

Ah, you're welcome.
YOU'RE NOT CRAZY, you're a fangirl <3 .. But I know what you mean, I feel the same way. Such a relationship would be kind of bittersweet and I tried to illustrate this in this story.
believe me, I did think about it a looot more, about.. 3 days before even start to write this? and it made me melancholic D:

I'm really happy you like it so much you consider to read it several times <33

kiyo_shi March 23 2010, 16:09:37 UTC

wow!!!

love it!

i loved the ambience/the feeling of the story
(i hope you know what i want to say -.-)

arifuretakotoba March 23 2010, 18:49:26 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting.

The atmosphere was meant to have a touching impact, so it makes me happy to read that you liked it.

zaq_in_chill March 23 2010, 17:08:54 UTC

this is wonderful... just beautiful... and loving the implied RyOkura teasing... hahaha

what a good way to top my night off... sweet dreams!

arifuretakotoba March 23 2010, 18:51:47 UTC

Having it called "wonderful" and "beautiful" encourages me a lot, thank you for that.
The RyOkura teasing was kind of random, but well... I like both of them too much to not mention some interaction between them D: