Why me???

[star4nsync]

I sent a host a part of my story that I wrote, and got a not so good message... she told me tips, but the story is SO LONG that I have to go back and fix EVERYTHING in it. I was putting PAST TENSE and PRESENT TENSE together when you're not suppose to, past is better for a story, so she won't post it up on her site until I fix it.
Well, going to eat now.

Amber