I need Feedback!
People! I need Feedback!
I'm trying to make something out of all the writing that I've been doing at stusik-i-sharik... Something that might help us financially with continuing our trip. I would like to apply to some small e-magazines first, and maybe even publish/e-publish a b... boo.. b... I can't say the word. I'm a little embarrassed right now as you can see...
In any case, I need some constructive criticism. If it's not going to trouble you too much, I would like to hear your honest opinion on my writing. Don't worry about hurting my feelings - I have Shurik's shoulder to cry on. Ideally, you'd be able to point me to a specific chapter in stusik-i-sharik and say why it's good/bad and why. Even more ideally you would tell me how can improve in this field.
ps
do me a favor, and not have my spelling be an issue... I think that in this area even shock-therapy is going to useless...
I'm trying to make something out of all the writing that I've been doing at stusik-i-sharik... Something that might help us financially with continuing our trip. I would like to apply to some small e-magazines first, and maybe even publish/e-publish a b... boo.. b... I can't say the word. I'm a little embarrassed right now as you can see...
In any case, I need some constructive criticism. If it's not going to trouble you too much, I would like to hear your honest opinion on my writing. Don't worry about hurting my feelings - I have Shurik's shoulder to cry on. Ideally, you'd be able to point me to a specific chapter in stusik-i-sharik and say why it's good/bad and why. Even more ideally you would tell me how can improve in this field.
ps
do me a favor, and not have my spelling be an issue... I think that in this area even shock-therapy is going to useless...