Famous Last Words

[standgale]

LJ Idol Week 2 - Three Little Words

(Please suspend belief, as well as knowledge of history, chemistry and archaeology :D )

Famous Last Words

Comments

[vampedvixen]

I really enjoyed this story, and I didn't think my belief had to be suspended SO much. I like the use of the three words at the end, they put a nice cap to everything. The only thing I would say is that the formatting could be better. I'd suggest putting a line break between each paragraph so they don't end up being squished up against each other. It'll make it easier for the audience to read it-- and that'll make more people WANT to read it. Otherwise, this was really well done. Bravo!

[standgale]

Hi, thanks for your comment! I put in some line breaks - not sure what to do about the dialogue, it kind of looks funny.
I wasn't sure about using this story because it is, well, silly. But I love it because it's silly.

[zeitgeistic]

I have a special weakness for druid stories! I liked the past/present segmentation you used.

[standgale]

Druids are such a big part of the mythology of our current (western) fantasy culture that I am a bit worried that it won't really fit with everyone's preferred druid ideas, but since we don't really know anything concrete about them, then I figure it's fair game :)
What I wish we had is a time machine that works like a tv* - I don't want to go back in time, but it would be so awesome to see what really happened back then.

*I may have read a story about this once?

[from_the_pit]

Such a cool story!

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[marstokyo]

Never met a Druid I didn't like!