from my new blog "boss"
i asked him for feedback, yk cuz i am needy that way...
"I don't think your voice is schizophrenic at all...I adored the
ovulating bit!!! and I really liked the practical info you gave on the
one previous to that. I say keep going with it. Just be sure to temper
your terrific narrative with a solid takeaway idea that'll make mommies
and daddies think about doing better, feeling better, and loving
themselves and their kids better."
"I don't think your voice is schizophrenic at all...I adored the
ovulating bit!!! and I really liked the practical info you gave on the
one previous to that. I say keep going with it. Just be sure to temper
your terrific narrative with a solid takeaway idea that'll make mommies
and daddies think about doing better, feeling better, and loving
themselves and their kids better."