angsty poem.. how I feel... what do you think of it?

[staker]

there is no weight to hold my body down
the silent screams of tumultuous agony resonate through the night
echoes of a lifetime ago flutter by
eyes cry tears of resentment and fall to a bed of ill-fated romance
time ticks passing seconds into days
no earthly coil of sincerity can hide the bellowing pain tonight
smells linger to abandoned bliss
heavens door awaits another lost soul shrouded in shame
somber lights shade infinity
the end of everything hides in a guise of love

If anyone has and comments, questions, or criticisms, please leave a comment or e-mail me. I would appreciate it very much.