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Fic: Some Soft Aberration (1/7)

Jun 20, 2007 13:46

Some Soft Aberration (1/7)
Rating: PG13
Who: Goren/Eames
Random: Starts post-Blind Spot and will cover the entire season.
Random 2: Thanks to piecesofalice, who is not dead.
Summary: There is a rumbling here.

( Katharine, we die. )

goren/eames, fandom: law and order - criminal intent

Comments 19

qill13 June 20 2007, 18:45:50 UTC

(I suck at feedback. Just so you know.)

This...this is lyrical and evocative and generally awesome.

atlashrugged June 22 2007, 21:12:59 UTC

(You don't.)

Thanks! There's some hand thrown in later for you. You'll know when you see it.

theevilpuppy June 20 2007, 19:51:14 UTC

This is so stunningly beautiful. *sighs* I can't even begin to tell you how much I love it. Your writing is incredible and conveys so much emotion. Reading this story is almost like reading a poem.

I should feel guilty for reading it while I should be studying but it's too good to feel guilty. Instead, I find myself impatiently waiting for the next part. :0)

atlashrugged June 24 2007, 17:37:05 UTC

Thanks. Oddly, I get that poem comment a lot. The only way I can get through studying is to do it inconsistently, but I don't feel guilty.

thousand_miles June 20 2007, 20:42:13 UTC

TERRIFIC!! There aren't enough words to describe this. My favourite bits:

"There will always be violence in his desire for her."
Can I just say WOW at that?

“No,” he says, staring straight into the face of the one thing he thought he could keep together. “I need you.”
Spot on, he can be that direct, without truly realizing the full extent of his words!

"He takes the sweater from her hands, slips it over her head, and quietly allows his heart to break."
Heartbreaking!

And the heartbeating bit at the end, just as beautiful.

I am sooo looking forward to more. This is just outstanding!

atlashrugged June 24 2007, 17:45:13 UTC

Thanks.

odakota_rose June 21 2007, 01:22:56 UTC

Wow... Just wow. That's all I can say, except for the fact that this is amazing and I can't wait for more.

atlashrugged June 24 2007, 18:03:12 UTC

I love your icon. It looks like he's ... I don't know, potentially something? Words are annoying when they don't work. Thanks.

odakota_rose June 24 2007, 18:43:35 UTC

Heh, yeah.. I never could quite figure out that icon ;)
hyare made it.

And yes, words are most annoying when they're being strange like that..

atlashrugged June 24 2007, 21:46:15 UTC

She makes great icons. And induced my capslocking, so.

Also, I just friended you. The combination of your journal layout and the poetry blurb was too difficult to resist.

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atlashrugged June 24 2007, 17:58:40 UTC

Me too! I mean finishing it. Thank you!