Feeling better than it sounds

Jun 17, 2010 00:48


Feeling better than it sounds
Onew/Jonghyun/Key1882 words, nc-17
First proper smut fic, so forgive the fail ;~;

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namae_nai June 16 2010, 17:12:46 UTC
THIS MAKES ME TINGLE TINGLE

it was awesome
more? 8D

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mei_zi June 16 2010, 17:42:49 UTC
um, okay. that was kind of amazing. 8D

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xxqod June 16 2010, 18:20:25 UTC
hehe.
Jonghyun didn't see the disadvantage to his amazing idea XD
hehe.

<3 ~~

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faded_citylites June 16 2010, 19:45:47 UTC
ot3. sexy. oh yes.

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salted_taiyaki June 16 2010, 21:23:37 UTC
lkjsdf it's so great seeing stuff from you, but onjongkey smut? and a bottom!jinki to top it all off?
this is perfection ♥

also, this line:
and Jinki can feel himself clench around Kibum as he trips into orgasm.
i really love the verb choice LOL. i don't know if this was supposed to be intentional, but i just...not really just the imagery, but it's witty haha.

i love the connection between jonghyun and kibum and the idle talk in the middle of it all is just so sweet dohhh

barhg i can't say much about smut, 'sides that it was hot and uhh yup. thank you for sharing !

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