Gundam Wing: Heero/Duo, times of day: dawn

[merith]

title: my horizon, author: merith, theme: times of day - dawn, rating: PG,
notes: written for the fall '06 stagesoflove, this is the first of five stories for this theme.

Comments

[meritjubet]

Great atmosphere, you have created a scene that is believable, emotional and realistic. I found Heero endearing, though I briefly depaired of his timing ^_____^

[merith]

hehe, well, to him it was just the right time. thanks merit!

[wickedgameff]

*sigh* that heero.

but it was so good!!!!!! i love your heero.

[merith]

thanks wicked! :) i love heero and hope my writing reflects the respect i have for him.

i'm glad you liked the story.

[animadri]

Heero letting his guard down and getting caught up in the moment, if only briefly = priceless!

*loves*

[merith]

hehe... yeah, that heero surprises folks every once in awhile... especially duo! :)

thanks!

[ravensilver]

Oh... I like this beginning! Loved the interaction between the two and how Heero just threw out that line *knowing* that Duo couldn't do anything about it at that moment. :)

Looking forward to the next part. :)

[merith]

thanks! i'm hopeing to keep it up going forward. and heero can be so sneaky that way. :)

thanks for reading! :)

[sharona1x2]

That was perfect, Merith. The dawn of a new relationship between them. I love the way it makes me think of them in Endless Waltz, and the way they worked so well together. It's a pleasure to read something so in character for them.

[merith]

*snugs* thank you so much sharon. :)

it was sort of the feel i was hinting at. and hope to keep it up for the rest of the set.