Comments | stagesoflove: Yami no Matsuei

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Yami no Matsuei - Watari/Tatsumi

Feb 11, 2006 09:43

Title: Serotonin
Author: rubber_boots
Theme: Romance
Rating: PG-ish
Word Count: 100
Notes: Goes along with my Muraki/Watari drabbles to make up a semi-plot. No spoilers for the show/manga.

( Serotonin )

yami no matsuei, romance, yutaka watari/seiichiro tatsumi

Comments 6

fleshlycherry February 11 2006, 18:50:44 UTC

*flails* YES.

Oh Tatsumi, I feel so bad for you.

*hugs Tatsumi but pushes Watari back towards Muraki*

rubber_boots February 11 2006, 22:28:06 UTC

Because clearly that's where he's heading. ^.^

wordsofastory February 11 2006, 19:15:14 UTC

Awww. But very nice.

rubber_boots February 11 2006, 22:29:47 UTC

Tatsumi has emotional issues... First his mother, then Tsuzuki. Will he ever get a break...? Glad you liked ^.^

strayfish February 11 2006, 23:58:21 UTC

Craziness~

Poor Tatsumi!

I noticed though, in the third last line, you change tenses. Is that intentional? It threw me off just a tad.

I like the dorr closing and the crash, though, my mental soundboard fills the scene in perfectly.

rubber_boots February 12 2006, 02:31:20 UTC

*sighs* It wasn't intentional... the rough copy was a horrible tangle of tenses that I obviously couldn't straighten it out when I typed it up... I kinda like it like that though...