(Untitled)

Nov 14, 2005 02:45

Disabling living, aiming to inspire
Your spirit’s infected with the desire
To perpetually buy time to inquire
as to how your life will soon transpire.
You’re seeking to light the unlightable fire
yet cease to live and thus will expire.

Leave a comment

Comments 8

teamrjmj20 November 14 2005, 16:18:34 UTC
at the sake of not being overly repetitive, i'm just going to let you guess what i'm going to say, cuz everbody already knows i praise your artwork like its god

Reply

stagequestmac November 16 2005, 04:31:09 UTC
my art replies: "Thank you my child.
Go in peace."

Reply

teamrjmj20 November 16 2005, 05:07:28 UTC
lol. i would've never come up with such a great reply

Reply


dr_kipper November 15 2005, 02:28:45 UTC
So...are you gonna be around for awhile now? Cause if I get used to getting good poetry again & get hurt...

I mean it's just that, I just kinda got over our last separation and...

LOL...You are so awesome. Good to see you here.

Reply

stagequestmac November 16 2005, 04:38:11 UTC
i will try with all my spirit to be around forever lol.
aww i love when you appreciate my little scraps of crafts i throw together to communicate ya know. everybody speaks their soul in different ways - and while this is wonderful, the true thing they seek with this is for some other soul to hear their voice and take in what it pours out.
I hope you know how awesome YOU are and how much i appreciate all of you who read my stuff and give comments

Reply

dr_kipper November 16 2005, 07:20:00 UTC
Good. I will accept you being around at least forever. It'd be nice to know I won't be the only one.

What's so beautiful about what you write is that they are mere words that, like the proverbial tree falling unheard in the forest, mean nothing until they come crashing down with no less force upon me (and others, and others, and others) with screaming clarity of meaning & then the mere words carry such truth into & through me so that I often feel that I already KNOW what I am reading and instantly see where I am being led. Deja Vu sometimes & Vuja de othertimes (the feeling that I have never been there before, again...) But always with a sense of what Mr. Leonard on the 93Q Zoo morning show, YEARS ago called:"I Know that's right.:"

If you'll keep writing, I'll keep being amazed & reading & commenting.

Reply


_burlesque__ November 15 2005, 22:04:17 UTC
Ohemgee, you have net life again!
Beautimous, m'dear. I like the ones you wrote in my journal that one night, too. Lots. I think they're gonna go on my new walls.

Reply

stagequestmac November 16 2005, 04:40:06 UTC
yay for technolomuhgee!
aww thanks! you're the like poetry queen i feel honored when you merely READ my little shit

Reply


Leave a comment

Up