LJ Idol -- Sticks and Stones

Jan 16, 2012 18:31


First, you dig a hole.

Not too deep. Enough to twist an ankle if you step in it. That is the point, after all, it’s a hole of protection.

Next, maybe you stick sharpened sticks into the mud at the bottom, to add insult to injury - stabbing your foot even as your ankle twists out from under you.

Finally, you cover the hole lightly with leaves. So they ( Read more... )

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unmowngrass January 17 2012, 17:04:44 UTC
This was a good entry, very dramatic!

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stacieann15 January 19 2012, 20:30:24 UTC
Thanks so much!

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pixiebelle January 18 2012, 02:12:51 UTC
Interesting story! I really liked the dynamics at play here. How these were the robbers to her cops, friends but also challengers. Pretty cool!

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stacieann15 January 19 2012, 20:30:18 UTC
Thank you!

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rumplebuttkins January 18 2012, 05:19:57 UTC
Haha, this was awesome. My mind continues past the end of the entry, imagining an epic war of children, up on a movie screen.

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stacieann15 January 19 2012, 20:30:09 UTC
:) Thanks for reading!

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stacieann15 January 19 2012, 20:30:00 UTC
Ha! I am sure it was epic in our views! I am sure it wasn't as impressive if an objective adult looked at it. :)

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whipchick January 18 2012, 07:10:50 UTC
I like the complexity of the relationships here - neat to hear the different threads between them!

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stacieann15 January 19 2012, 20:29:24 UTC
Thank you. I guess big brothers (even when they aren't your blood relations) are always complex in their treatment of little sisters.

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mstrobel January 18 2012, 11:26:32 UTC
*grins* I really enjoyed this!

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stacieann15 January 19 2012, 20:28:45 UTC
Thank you! :)

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