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SHIP WARS: PROMPT 6 ENTRY: TEAM PIRK

Apr 29, 2010 22:58

Title:Three Things That Might Have Happened to Christopher Pike and Jim Kirk
Ship: Team Pirk
Author: re_white / Betas: near_family, leftarrow and pororoca
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Content some readers may find disturbing.
Universe: Various. AOS and AOS!Mirrorverse
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters and court no profits with this fanwork.

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prompt 6 entry, team pirk, ship wars

Comments 37

goldenspiderweb April 30 2010, 21:38:34 UTC

This was gorgeous. The contrast between the universes and twisted relationships. Simply put, wonderful job!

weepingnaiad April 30 2010, 21:38:58 UTC

This was dark, twisted, brilliant Mirror!Verse. It was well done, but left me unsettled. Weirdest thing was I'm not sure why?

You always come up with such thinky fills! Make me ponder... and now I will let this sift in my grey cells and come back with more coherent feedback.

Still, even if I never quite get it to all make sense, it was definitely dark and provoked quite visceral reactions, and isn't that what the best Mirror!Verse is supposed to do?

tiedye_ragdoll April 30 2010, 22:27:44 UTC

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lunasky3 April 30 2010, 22:33:16 UTC

Holy shit

That. And the. And then that thing. And that one.

I actually don't know how to respond to this coherently because I am blown a-freaken-way by every inch. Woah. Loved it beyond words.

geeky_ramblings April 30 2010, 22:53:53 UTC

OMG! This rocked! I love that you contrasted both universes :D