Another WIP for help (day 3)

[st_minority]

This one is a Sweeney Todd one. Of course, can't have consentual sex when Sweeney Todd is involved! Unless, Ichabod or Fred happen to be around, which they haven't been in mine. Anyway! For this, I know sort of what's going to happen, but I don't know how to go about/write the Todd's rape scene. And I just had a thought about having Fred make an

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[rose_melody2]

I think it's going good. You'll definitely find a way to continue the scene. And yes, Fred should definitely appear! :D

Just, pretty please don't write too much blood-play or gore-y things like that; it really churns my stomach, lol.

But, looking forward to it!

[st_minority]

Thank ya. :) Would it be better if Fred knows Sweeney before it happened? Pre-existing feelings? It'd sort of make the comfort easier. What do you think?

I'll try to keep whatever blood-play gore-y things that should happen turned down a notch. There may be none at all. :D

[rose_melody2]

Actually, yeah, that's what I was assuming - a pre-existing relationship between Fred and Sweeney; he just happened to not be mentioned in the first half of the fic.
How would you go about having Fred find Sweeney? Cause if he only came up to the barber shop a day after and Mrs. Lovett told him what happened, it wouldn't be very dramatic. Hm...

[st_minority]

Okay. Maybe not like, really developed to the point where they've slept together, but they know there's an attraction, maybe have even made out?
I was thinking he'd either come to Turpin's house and walk into the room to discover the guests gathered around the couch, watching as someone raped Sweeney, or he would come into the room just as the last person finished with Todd. What do you think?

[rose_melody2]

I like the sound of that. It all fits nicely. Go write! ;)