21 JS fic that's been stewin'...

[st_minority]

Okay. Anyone help me out here. This one's been sitting in a WIP folder for probably over a year now. I don't know how to continue on. I had originally intended them to get drunk and have sex of course, but I don't know. Please give me some thoughts/ideas/whatevers. I'm itching to write lately! But horrible at actually sitting down and focusing.

Comments

[nikki_cee]

I like this so far :) So uh... ideas. I'm thinking that yeah, they have drunk sex, but in the morning maybe one is okay with it(because he had been secretly loving the other for like, forever) while the other regrets it? Or they both realize how much they love each other, express their feelings, and go back to bed ;) lol... can't think a lot atm :/

[st_minority]

Great! Good to know it's not crap. :)
Which one do you think would be okay with it if it were just one who was? Doug? and how would it come out? Would it be just like, "since we had sex, I wanna say I've wanted it for a long time, let me be your sugar daddy" - lmao. Maybe not like that, but....

[nikki_cee]

lmao. Yeah, I was picturing Tom as the regretting one. I think maybe he'd be really nervous, wanting to leave, where Doug is wanting him to stay, to talk things out. Tom agrees, then Doug confesses that he's liked Tom for awhile now--maybe even apologize for what happened. Like, "This isn't how I wanted it to happen, and I'm sorry... but I guess I'm also kinda glad it did." And Tom's all... Well, I dunno. lol. He probably just leaves, making things way complicated, and then avoids Doug later at work?
(and maybe also they're supposed to go out on a case together and Doug keeps trying to talk about it and Tom gets mad and uh... They have a huge fight and either nearly blow their covers, or actually completely avoid their covers.)
(Oh, and Doug slamming Tom up against a locker and kissing him to try and make Tom 'see his true feelings' could work too ;))

That's all I've got. Christ, that turned out so long ha ha :)

[st_minority]

Tom becomes a drama queen? lol You have some great suggestions! Thanks! I especially love the image of Doug throwing Tom up against a locker and kissing him. Yeah. That's nice. :)

[iamavice]

well... the drunker you are the harder it is to get and keep an erection. maybe they get so incredibly drunk that when Penhall wakes the next morning w/ a seemingly nude (he doesn't check for boxers) Hanson next to him, he just assumes they had sex (which is like a dream come true for him, except the whole being too drunk to remember part) and when Tom wakes up he says some things that give away how he feels and what he seems to think happened (Tom ofcourse would know that it did not, as you can't tell me a guy can wake up and not know if he's been penetrated the night before - there are residual sensations; esp. if it was a first time)

[st_minority]

That is true. I'm thinking then they could just make out and mess around a bit without actually having intercourse. It would all still feel good whether they can get an erection or not. Perhaps they can even do a clumsy strip tease for each other. lol