Comments | ssw_loved: The Person; Primeval Fic

ssw_loved

The Person; Primeval Fic

Mar 07, 2011 02:25

Title: The Person
Author: ssw_loved
Characters: Abby, Becker, mentions of Danny, Matt, Connor, and Jess
Pairings: Becker/Matt, Abby/Connor, mentions of Becker/Danny, platonic Abby/Becker
Rating: R (see warning)
Warnings: mentions of the topic of suicide (no character death)
Spoilers: series 4
Summary: “Maybe that was what it was about - people.” Abby shows up ( Read more... )

Comments 16

quoththewriter March 7 2011, 07:55:55 UTC

Guh, this is absolutely gorgeous. You've been teasing me with pieces of this fic for ages now, I'm glad to finally get the whole thing. And it was so worth the wait. Gah, I love Abby and Becker's relationship so much. You know this, but it must be said. They're adorable. They'd definitely do anything for each other. And I can't believe she tried to kill herself. Oh, Abby.

*huggles her* And Becker, poor thing. This part was heartbreaking (but in the end so Becker because of course he would be the one to make the really painful sacrifices for his friends without thinking of himself):

He’d had that with Danny. He didn’t know what was there anymore, if it was salvageable or if maybe, that person who meant that much to Danny was Patrick. If that was what Danny needed … to search for his own person, to save that person who meant so much to him, than he’d allow it. He wouldn’t stop him.And the little touches of lightness with Matt warmed the cockles of my heart. Ohmygod the bit about them laughing so hard their sides hurt and all that ( ... )

ssw_loved March 7 2011, 08:02:19 UTC

Might want to wipe the crayon off your laptop screen.

I can't believe I actually finished this fic, oh my god. It's been quite some time, hasn't it? Grr. I hate that. i didn't even think I'd get this finished and than damnit, inspiration.

(My sentimental sldfkjsdf mood might have helped. ;) )

lucifersphoenix March 7 2011, 13:26:37 UTC

Becker and his guilt is so gorgeous and you pull it off so well in this fic. add in some Abby and you have a very moving fic :)

ssw_loved March 8 2011, 04:29:54 UTC

*g* Thanks! I'm grinning from ear to ear.

lukadreaming March 7 2011, 13:40:26 UTC

This is excellent -- very intense and very dark. I like the relationship you show between Abby and Matt.

ssw_loved March 8 2011, 04:29:26 UTC

*g* Thank you. One of these days I'll manage to actually write fluff.

nietie March 7 2011, 15:07:06 UTC

This is heartbreaking. I could feel both Abby's and Becker's angst. *huggles them both*

ssw_loved March 8 2011, 04:28:27 UTC

*huggles them with* Thank you.

fredbassett March 7 2011, 19:13:57 UTC

Poor Abby, she's certainly had it rough. I like the way Becker is doing his best to take care of her.

ssw_loved March 8 2011, 04:27:50 UTC

She definitely has. The poor girl needs some TLC.