FIC: The Luck of the Draw (PG-13)

Jul 20, 2014 01:40

Title: The Luck of the Draw
Type: Fic
Prompter: stgulik
Creator: shiv5468
Beta(s): shaggablesnape
Rating: PG-13
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): None.
(Highlight to View) Prompt: Severus accidentally gambles away his own apprentice, Miss Granger, in a high-stakes poker match. How will he get her back? I'd prefer a light-hearted story (SS/HG or SS & HG).
Summary: It’s better to ( Read more... )

2014 summer fanwork, fic

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melodyssister July 20 2014, 06:25:09 UTC
I am constantly amazed at how good the fics in the Promptfest continue to be. The levels of double-crossing and Slytherinness here... MA, I think I now who you are.

I was hard pressed to choose my favourite lines, but I think these are among the best:
Hermione was sat at his desk in the study with her Indentures spread across one side, and a book entitled ‘Wizarding Law for non-Lawyers, How to Lie, Cheat and Double Cross as well as a fully trained Lawyer’ on the other.

"I have no hopes that you’re going to be reasonable," Lucius replied. "You’ve not been reasonable in the thirty odd years I have known you and you aren’t going to start now."

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tophoenix July 20 2014, 09:42:37 UTC
What a lovely FIC, MA (or maybe not so mysterious MA) !!
It was a delight, from start to finish ad a favorite, for sure.

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beffeysue July 20 2014, 12:32:21 UTC
I love a good story about Slytherin antics between Lucius and Severus. Here they are like cousins or brothers who have an innate need to compete and engage in one-upmanship but still have each other's welfare at heart.

My favorite line has to be: "I tell you what, I’ll send you the antidote by way of thanks," Severus replied out of the corner of his mouth, still smiling at Hermione.

Well done, Mystery Author!

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jaxomsride July 20 2014, 12:59:17 UTC
Well done MA a delight from start to finish. I had a feeling Lucius was up to something and I was right!

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orlando_switch July 20 2014, 13:47:46 UTC
Oh this was sweet! And a very Slytherin way of helping a dear friend.

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