I like how you build upon increasingly intense moments of sensation to your climax, which is their climax-not just physically but emotionally. Hermione and Severus come together in a complete understanding here, and one that makes it clear what they share in a natural, meaningful way.
How do I even begin to comment on such a fic? π
I love the escalation of their touches, both in the physical and emotional sense. Severus watching Hermione in her quiet moments, seeing what other did not was utter perfection.
And the use of those touches in the final section!! Damn, that made me feel all sorts of things.
Oh, my great googly moogly, MA! This was just utterly brilliant. You should be so proud of what youβve written and shared with us here.
I am quite spoiled to have had so many prompts answered and at the beginning of the fest too! This is my first time participating and I didnβt expect to have any of mine spark much interest with so many other wonderful prompts available. ππππ
Hermione wasnβt the only one that caught fire, if I may be as bold. Your writing is viscerally sensual, a lyrical grace with a sense of descriptive urgency behind it. I am absolutely in awe of it to be perfectly frank.
You introduce Snape perfectly with the dark silk of his voice and I knew straight from the beginning I was a complete goner. π₯΅π₯΅
I have a few favorite passages, such as: He reached up with one of his hands, fingers long and expressive, his skin so pale it was almost translucent. He cradled her hand with his own and she marveled for a second at the contrast. His larger hand covered her smaller one, his porcelain skin against her
( ... )
Oh my goodness! This was just beautiful. I absolutely loved it--especially how you brought all of those little touches together in the final section! ππππ
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How do I even begin to comment on such a fic? π
I love the escalation of their touches, both in the physical and emotional sense. Severus watching Hermione in her quiet moments, seeing what other did not was utter perfection.
And the use of those touches in the final section!! Damn, that made me feel all sorts of things.
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Oh, my great googly moogly, MA! This was just utterly brilliant. You should be so proud of what youβve written and shared with us here.
I am quite spoiled to have had so many prompts answered and at the beginning of the fest too! This is my first time participating and I didnβt expect to have any of mine spark much interest with so many other wonderful prompts available. ππππ
Hermione wasnβt the only one that caught fire, if I may be as bold. Your writing is viscerally sensual, a lyrical grace with a sense of descriptive urgency behind it. I am absolutely in awe of it to be perfectly frank.
You introduce Snape perfectly with the dark silk of his voice and I knew straight from the beginning I was a complete goner. π₯΅π₯΅
I have a few favorite passages, such as:
He reached up with one of his hands, fingers long and expressive, his skin so pale it was almost translucent. He cradled her hand with his own and she marveled for a second at the contrast. His larger hand covered her smaller one, his porcelain skin against her ( ... )
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Um ...
Excuse me please. I think I should go to bed.
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